Forever Hold My Heart - Comments

:ooooo I wanna know what was in the safe!!!!!!! x] Pretttttttttttty please

Fuck yes! Did I read I right?! THE TEAM IS REUNITES?! :DD and OH MY GOD! There's going to be a SEQUEL?! :DD you just made my day! I can't wait! ^^ it's the sister isn't it? I wonder if Nate will help her this time.. Brayden did mention about Nate choosing Katelyn over her sister, right? But how could Katelyns mom be pregnant without Katelyn knowing? She must have a twin or it was born before she could remember OR once again 'medicines' were involved, right? Ôô Still sad that they all died though! :/

I like. :)

I knew it. I just knew it. Marcus would not survive with his catch. That's so sad. Tears were shed. No joke. Even though Marcus had his difficult and annoying moments, he was awesome and funny. I can't believe it. And Mason, too?! He was so young! D: so now the war is over?? Ôó I still got unanswered questions though! Why did Travis ask for Nathaniel? I didn't quite get it. Also, what was that with Nate? What sister? and how are they going to get Kaitlyn's biological father? Ôô and everyone else is fine, right? Damien, Blake, Travis, etc.? please please do a sequel! This story is too awesome to end! >.<

Shit! O_O I can't believe that that happened! Reading the title and having Clarisse cutting her finger.. I really thought she was going to cut nine. N.I.N.E.! This was pretty intense! Did she take her finger with her? They're custos.. Couldn't it heal?? Ôó and Nate helped her? Who is he siding with?? Fucking shit! I'm glad Clarisse died! AND I'm glad that most of them are intact, too! ^^ but what about Marcus?? >.< just... Oh my god. I think YOU are toying with my emotions the most! ... o_o

OH MY GOOOD!! You've got my nerves on the edge! I'm so happy! I was literally fist pumping through out this part! Like when she kicked Elis ass! When the guys rescued her (which I loved since she mentioned that they were like the "untouchables" :P), when Damien was the first to sign up (still not over Damien! XD) and then Blake! And then all the others. I just hope everyone will make it out alive! But then again.. One of them is bound to die but I have my hopes high that you wouldn't do that to Katelyn and us. Also, I dont know how to feel about Travis and Katelyn (yes, still. ^^) it's weird but I guess? :s On the other hand I'm so worried about all of them! How is this war going to end? How many won't come back?? Hopefully 10 out of 10 will be save! (Did you get my hint? :P) I hope that Katelyns plan is not to let them go out all a once. She should split them up... So when the FI things that they surrounded the custos, the custos come out and surround them. How awesome would that be?! :DD I'm crossing my finger for no deaths! Especially for Damien, Blake, Adrian, Daniel, Jake, Landon, Julian, Matthew, Marcus, Devin, Travis, her team.. Well, practically all who are close to her. also.. Marcus should have to persons by his sides because of his catch.. Ôó also, the guardians who are guarding the Royals better do one hell of a job! If they don't.. Katelyn could be on danger, too!

holy shit. I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUU!

Tristan? Which Tristan.. did he appear before? oô AND HOLY FUCK! NATHANIEL?! THE NATE?! I can't believe it! He was so nice and then..?! SHIT! O_O amd her dad wasn't her real dad but the Royal is her dad? What the fuck even.. I thought Royals and Custos that bonded are practically "in love", well, not exactly but you know what I mean, right? I just can't believe it.. I'm so speechless -yeah, speechless and still have something to write.. XD
but they wouldn't kill her.. they need her to open the safe. That's why I believe that she should somehow get that blade out and go to sleep... or "open her mind".. I mean, broadcasting everything while telling them to wait to safe her would be cool.. Or she could "join" the team as a disguise and take everybody out at once, claiming that others killed the ones she killed.. >:DD I just really hope everything goes well.. :) and her singing at the end? Classic, I think her enemies will be frustrated that she's so relaxed (With a blade stuck to her arm) ^^

I just read the whole story again because I forgot some things so yeah.. Mind if I leave some thoughts before I come to the most recent chapter? Which by the way I can't believe she left all of them just like that but that's Katelyn, right? Always thinking of the others first! It was already like that when her first team, or better, family went out to party with her tagging along and later getting busted. :)
However, I still can't believe that Marcus and Matthew were that violent at the beginning! I mean, first a lamp and then a baseball bat?! Ouch? O_O and I still don't understand why Travis asked Katelyn if she knew a Nathaniel.? Does he mean Nate with Nathaniel? are they related or why was he asking that question? And is Nate a Royal.. I think the better question would be: What is it with Nate? and Telepathy.. will she ever get it? -How cool would it be, when it suddenly clicked and she could talk via thoughts with all the guys at the camp while she's with Eli in the forest?! *-* and in Ch.12 somebody was hurt, who was it? OÔ Also, what's Travis catch by entering peoples dreams? && am I right when I say that the F.I. have her gun? oÔ and did Gavin bond with anybody? Reading the story again, I really miss her time with her family (Blake, Damien, Eddie, Adrian, Julian, Daniel)... will they ever get to reminisce their time? Will they ever be able to work together as a team? Will her family get out there to fight for her? They better, because I do believe that Blake once said that 'they' would personally go into the forest to get her. ^^ ( I personally wouldn't mind for her family including Jack, Adam and Landon to save her) lol, GUILTY! I'm sucker for their bonding.. >.< and, one last question -I'm annoying, aren't I? but I just really love this story, hence all those questions..-: Is the whole plot (the custos, the royals,´, etc.) your own idea or did you read a book? because if it's your own idea, props to you! ^^

To the last chapter: I'm glad it's not ending! :D and I'm not sure how to feel about Travis and Katelyn as a couple just yet because I still didn't get over Damien (lol, sorry? XD) but I guess, what ever floats their boat? They do get along pretty well and I do love Travis to bits.. I just always thought that they were like brother and sister... ^^
As to what happens to her, I hope that she lives! O_O I mean, she's the main character, right? oô I'm just wondering who she will see on her mothers team. Will there be one or more who are originally campers? Is her dad going to appear? Who will she get to meet again from the other world? oô gaaaah! I just hope that everything will turn out well in the end. :) Hope you update soon, cause, just like @Baby-I-like-it97, I can't wait!! :DD

OMFG. STOP DOING THIS TO ME! Update soon!

fuck! IS HER DAD REALLY ALIVE?! O_O Whose the bad guy now?! GOOOOOD! So many questions! So much is happening at the same time just.. WHAT?! O_O you have to update soon! I want answers! >.< :D

Geeee!! This was intense! O_O no shit this -> O_O <- is the way my eyes are at the moment. Hopefully she will find the poison and NOT get in trouble.. And Marcus mad? Woohoo! He's going to throw shit, won't he? Ôó

So, I love this story. I really do. :) I noticed in a couple of places you've done your coding wrong. It's supposed to be squared brackets like this: [ ] instead of this: <> but everything else in that area is great. One more little tiny suggestion, when you're putting the links to the outfits if you put them in this format: [url= url.goes@here] Whatever you want it to be [/url] it should work and I'd personally put it in your authors notes as to not distract from the story. :) I really do love this and Travis is AWESOME! :D Please keep updating.

And the hunt beginns! So will she go get the medicine for Travis?? I don't wan him to die! :(( but when she is looking for those medicines.. Doesn't that mean she will run into her mothers 'team'?? She will be kicked out of the board then! O_O

You better not let Travis die! I would be heartbroken and crying my eyes out! >.< love how the team is developing though! :)

Well, you officially gave me a heart attack! I scrolled through the chapter first to see the length and if there is another part hidden (habit) and then I read "well, I'm glad that's over"... O_O I thought that it was ENDING!! D:
I'm glad it's not though! :D
well, I just KNEW something's wrong with Gavin! Psssh! Best friends my ass! -.- wished Damien were the one to be there for her though.. Yes, I'm still not over Damien! :b

Update soon! <3

update like soon k?

update like soon k?

GAHHHH I LOVE IT! <3