Ugh, your style of writing is absolutely beautiful and captivating. You make simple things sound so beautiful and intriguing. This is a short story, but you still find a way to pull in an audience with few words. The relationship and interactions between the characters feels genuine, they feel like something that really happened. Sometimes, authors try to create dialogue or character relationships and they feel forced, they also feel fictional. This doesn't at all. There is a lack of description with the characters, which someone before me has mentioned, that I also really enjoy. I love how this story doesn't include very detail necessarily, but still feels complete. It didn't leave me feeling like I was missing something, but still kept me wondering about the aftermath. You use beautiful vocabulary that perfectly captures the mood of your story. I thought this was very well written and is exactly what i enjoy in a short story. This was published ages ago, so I doubt you'll see it, but if you do, I would like you to know I absolutely enjoyed it and I can hardly imagine where your writing has taken off from since this was written.
September 23rd, 2016 at 05:01pm