Okay, first: The layout is freaking amazing. Your story obviously corresponds with the lyrics of the song and I also liked how you used some lyrics. I also liked the story being in the form of a letter :) I get a bunch of those for my contests, but I love them; no idea why. There were just quite a bit of grammatical errors that kind of got to me, which can be debatable because it's a letter; also some of the language seemed casual, but that's debatable as well. I'll be announcing the winner sometime this week, so remember to check. Good luck!
December 19th, 2011 at 08:02am
