Splinters - Comments

Poor Remus... Didn't get his kiss...

Whoo, a Harry Potter fan-fiction :3 I love Harry Potter so I'll definitely like reading this and before I start off, I would just like to say that your layout is gorgeous. I love the wood background - I always like wood backgrounds as they look so clean and they always match - and the banner gif and the icons in the summary are a nice touch :3

I like the fact that this is about Sirius and Remus, they're two of my favourite characters and I've always liked their friendship together in the Harry Potter books. I like how you start off the story with something so mundane such as doodling in your workbook. When authors add in everyday detail that a lot of people tend to skimp on, it makes me smile :) Haha, I like how you remained true to their personalities, I really hate it when people butcher characters' personalities to pieces, and them talking about James and Lily made me smile ;D I like the fact that it didn't move too fast like the commenter above me said, and I like how instead of it ending with rainbows and sunshine and the perfect ending, it just kind of ends with a, "What if..." sort of vibe, and I feel bad for Remus, I wish that I could just hug him! You're a very good writer and this was really endearing and such a natural relationship between two good friends.

Keep up up the good work <3

This is absolutely amazing. You are such a gifted writer!

I have never read any fanfiction about Sirius and Remus before. I think it is ingenious that you used these two characters. I really love that it makes this story so unique. I feel like they do not take part in the books enough. And you put a nice twist on what they were like.

You were perfect with your word choice. And nothing seemed to be moving too fast, like it does in a lot of short stories. I loved that you talked about James, Peter, and Snape. It really gave the reader a sense of how secretive the two of them would be, and what the situation is like. I am so sad that Peter ruined a chance at the end! Or was it Sirius, because he was sleeping? I loved the conversations that they were having, and the calm setting that you placed Sirius and Remus in.

You are making me want to go and reread all of the books again! Great job! :]