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  • hereticbl00d.

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    Brian as a princess.. I'm done. I'm so done hahaha. The first chapter made me laugh so much. I could just imagine him prancing around with his extremely pretty hair, singing to himself. Perfect! lmfao

    Yay, he finally made it outside! Him running about excitedly and giddy warmed my heart so much Cute

    At first, I thought the fact he is so obviously gay, was why he was deemed so special, was why his father was so intent on keeping him locked up. The old man is getting on a bit now, he just doesn't understand. But reading that he could jump higher and run faster.. maybe that's why he's kept locked up, knowing you though, there'll be another completely different and much better reason why he's deemed so "special"

    How anyone could live in that he’d never understand, it was horrid I can imagine making a face like Snob hahaha.

    Kitty!Brian is back! Wow ahsdjhasds Brian giggling in his sleep, rolling round and snuggling, too much cute! Cute overload!

    When it sank in that the giant animal had been cleaning him, with its tongue, Brian didn’t know if he wanted to scream, panic, cry or faint, so he settled for staying silent, right up until the animal leaned in again and ran its lolling tongue over his hair, the gesture resulting in Brian shrieking and jumping to his feet, his fingers rubbing through the dark strands and trying in vain to spike it back up, a disgruntled glower forming when it wouldn’t work and the beast sat up.

    Doesn't matter that there is a beast of an animal sat licking him, he's just pissed that his hair won't spike up, that's.. just.. Brian. XD

    I'm laughing so much at the image of this animal carrying a singing Brian on his back, I can imagine him singing show tunes at the top of his voice with his hands in the air, the animal (is it Matt?) rolling its eyes. lmfao

    AWWWW! Brian and the..wolf? curled up together sleeping, too adorable! Twitch No, no.. the animal hugging Brian back has got to be THE CUTEST THING EVER!!! *sigh* such a cute friendship.

    Oh noes, Brian run! Take your pretty hair and run like the wind!! OMG NO!

    Yep, I thought he was a fang! See Brian, you’re not so precious that you can’t fight when you need to! Go Team Brian!! Okay, now he’s crying again. XD

    This friendship is seriously making me tear up! The two snuggling up to go to sleep, the animal, who is SO Matt, nudging him in thanks and pawing at him. *sniffle* more snuggling, they remind me of a cat and a dog, so cute.*deep breaths* I can feel in my waters that something bad is going to happen.

    Brian thinking he was being rejected, my heart breaks for him! Sad

    Yay, Matt’s here!! :D he’ll make everything better and now the sexy time can commence! XD Oh my, that sexy time did not disappoint! tehe

    to mate for life. so THAT’S why Brian is special, I gotcha now. I assume that was Brian’s little cherry being popped haha, you describe something so normally ewwy as beautiful, their joining was just perfect, Matt’s chest swelling with dominance and pride at the creation they made. This is making me cry it’s so beautiful.

    No, don’t cry! He hasn’t left you, he could never leave you! And now I’m laughing again at a pissed off Brian, can imagine the look on his face but he can’t resist the urge to snuggle up to Matty tehe

    Oh Bri, if only you knew. Just sit your pretty little self down and comb your hair, you precious human (non human) you. I knew the happiness couldn’t last forever, I wondered when his father would come looking for him and drag him back to his prison. *Sobs* you can’t break them up, they are bonded for life! They are.. I won’t spoil it for anyone else but dammit Brian Snr! Way to spoil the mood buddy!

    Brian told himself it was the baby’s way of saying hello, of saying thank you to him for the continued affection and protection. *Cries* because perfection Cry

    MATT TO THE RESCUE!!! Wow didn’t doubt you for a second! (although I cried a lot along with Brian)

    Brian couldn’t stop the joy that swelled in his heart when he saw the wide grin on his face as their offspring kicked against his hand. CRYING!!

    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! *totally ugly crying* there are waterfalls appearing on my face!

    YES, go and save your love Brian! *panics* NO, leave them alone you horrible fangs, be gone with you, go find something else to occupy your time (still crying). Oh god, I’m with the army here, this is so fucking sad! I’m in danger of being drowned here! Brian turn to glare at him, his face tear streaked and sullen as he curled over his mates body in order to protect him, in order to protect their child that kicked wildly, frightened by the raging sound. Jesus Christ, I’ve never cried so hard!

    OMG, I’VE NEVER BEEN SO HAPPY TO SEE MATT!!! Yeah, you wanna fucking run now ya bloody vamp! Matty will rip you limb from limb! (Jesus Christ, I’m raged! LOL)

    I’m so glad that Brian got the chance to tell his father exactly what he thought of him, the years and years he’d been locked up taking its toll. I’m so proud of him for finding his balls and standing up for himself, for Matt, for their unborn child, I feel like a proud mama XD Brian didn’t even hesitate, he just ran to Matt and nuzzled, oh my heart cannot take much more!

    Poor excuse for an ending, I don’t think so!! Perfect ending, Brian and Matt are together and they can now look forward to the birth of their child and, hopefully, many more to come!

    This story has made me feel so many emotions I feel exhausted! Haha. I cried, I laughed, I cried and laughed at the same time, I hugged Bella so tightly at times I think she thought I was some crazy, mad woman, crying all over her LOL.

    Amazing, amazing story that I will be happy to re-read over and over again. Right up there with Entice as one of my favourites. Now, onto the next! :D
    September 25th, 2013 at 01:02am
  • hereticbl00d.

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    I didn't end up going to sleep, started the first chapter and couldn't stop reading. I'm speechless, so for now, I shall go to bed and snuggle with Brian the neck pillow and cry like a baby at the beauty of this story, but I'll be back with a word explosion XD
    September 24th, 2013 at 06:53am
  • Synful Cocktail

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    You should write another story like this! I loved it so much!
    Your descriptions of everything were amazing and just fuck, words seriously can't describe how much I loved it!
    August 26th, 2013 at 02:45pm
  • JessLoui

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    Wow. This story was so amazing. I have honestly not read a story of that quality in quite a while
    March 16th, 2013 at 01:02pm
  • jazmyndylan

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    Oh my goodness I loved this! :D Took my emotions on a roller coaster ride! As cheesy as that may sound haha. This made me very happy, I haven't read a story this good in a long time, thank you (:
    February 1st, 2013 at 11:13am
  • zeevee3

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    Wow this is amazing :O Cant say im surprised after reading your other stuff ^_^

    When Matt died i almost cried o_o
    September 28th, 2012 at 09:03pm
  • StacieIerogeance

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    wow what an ending. That was really good I liked it.
    June 21st, 2012 at 08:11pm
  • littlemisslonely

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    So is it done? No more?
    April 29th, 2012 at 04:00am
  • helena_88

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    oh goddamn i had to fight hard to not let the tears fall.. i really thought he was dead for good.. O_o *sighs* i LOOOOVE happy endings and damn this was worth waiting for <3
    April 23rd, 2012 at 08:08pm
  • Synful Shadows

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    Thus was perfect! I'm glad Matt didn't die. And that Brian gets to live the way he chooses. Definitely worth the wait. :D Amazing job.
    April 23rd, 2012 at 06:14pm
  • D. Dixon

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    Oh my gosh, that was amazing! I almost cried when Matt died, so I'm so glad he's back. This story is truly amazing and brilliant and I loved it so much!! <3 Amazing job and amazing ending!
    April 23rd, 2012 at 05:14pm
  • Rapsby

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    OMG I LOVED IT :'D !!! It was perfect and as usual perfectly written !
    April 23rd, 2012 at 05:03pm
  • Phoenix_2095

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    Please Update!!!
    February 7th, 2012 at 12:08pm
  • bloodravyn

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    omfg!!!!
    nooo!
    February 4th, 2012 at 12:57am
  • absinthe.

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    He can't die! You must write more!:)
    January 19th, 2012 at 02:03am
  • Chelsea's Dead Smile

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    You continue or I burst into tears!
    I will do it!
    January 13th, 2012 at 02:48am
  • Synful Shadows

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    Noooo! *Whines pitifully* He can't die! That would be. Not when they just got reunited and then you think about the baby. No, he just can't die. D: Great update. Now I have to cry.
    January 11th, 2012 at 05:29pm
  • ForeverPlagued

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    No way! He can't die! UGHHHHH. Please write more soon!
    January 11th, 2012 at 04:29pm
  • iwasthere

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    Omg!!! Matt can't die, Brian would be devastated, it just wouldnt be fair!
    January 11th, 2012 at 02:46pm
  • Rapsby

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    O.O well I wasn't expecting that ! That's for damn sure !! But it was awesome !! And AWWWWWWWWW and then NOOOOO MATTIE !!! And BRIAN :( AND THE BABY !!! And just woooow !

    You can't just stop writing were you did missy !! Nuh huh ! Well, actually yes, you can because you're the master and it's your story but still !!! That was mean :(

    =D
    January 11th, 2012 at 02:15pm