Character description Name: Crystal Marie Peyton Age: 20 Looks: she has light golden brown skin, her eyes are a gorgeous amythest color. She has long dark brown and reddish hair that falls down to her waist in waves with slight curls. She a mixture between Asian and Italian. She's has an athletic body, but is still shaped in all of the right places. Clothing styles: she loves anything with ruffles and ribbons when it comes to being a girly girl, but she also likes hoodies with some ripped jeans and sneakers. She loves shoes more than sneakers. Car: bugatti and lamborghini. Parents: Midori Peyton (mother), Jenson Peyton (father) Background: Crystal was born into a rich family that her parents inheirted from Crystals grandparents. But Jenson is well known italian model when he was in his teen years and early twenties. While Midori is a well-known sergeon that helps people. That's why they moved to forks Washington. But Midori is a witch and so is Crystal. Friends: crystal gets along with anybody but she'll probably be closer to Bella and Leah more since she can relate to both of them.
Liking the story a lot. Can't help but feel like leah's date should go bad but not saying it in a mean way just like she is just not ready to find the one yet lolz but anyways update soon!!!!!
There are a few small gramatical errors, but I do like it. It seems to have a good storyline so far, and the friendship between Embry and Dayton is cute. Now, update, iiight?(: