The Boy With the Electric Blue Eyes - Comments

  • FrankJScott

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  • chey1235

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    omg, i love this story soo much!! i cant wait to read more, update soon!! Very Happy
    December 17th, 2012 at 03:43am
  • luvtheguv

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    i LOVE this! poeaseeeeeee write more
    April 26th, 2012 at 06:09pm
  • b-happy-d

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    New reader, and let me just say I love the story so far, so keep on updating :)
    February 17th, 2012 at 05:02pm
  • Syrena

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    I still haven't finished all of the chapters yet, but from what I've read, this is a pretty decent story! I love the mystery :)
    The title is awesome, and Max is my favourite character, so far!
    I have subscribed, and I look forward to reading more!
    Ps the layout is really cool!
    February 17th, 2012 at 12:15pm
  • naoedwardo

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    cheyenne. as soon as you get home from school, you should update. okay. thanks. cool. ♥
    February 7th, 2012 at 06:36am
  • Christiee02

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    Update! It's cool!
    February 5th, 2012 at 12:08pm
  • appley92

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    Worth the wait? Yes :)
    February 4th, 2012 at 05:08pm
  • Caityxo

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    Ooooh, I like this Chey ;) Well done!!
    Please update soon, I want to know more about their powers!! :)
    February 4th, 2012 at 11:04am
  • marauderette

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    Oooooh! I got mentioned in the A/N!!! :P lol! You don't have to say sorry about it!!!
    It would have been better if you didn't change P.O.V's so much. Like do the thing in Max's P.O.V and then Rose's you know. Hope you don't mind me telling you this. ^_^ I really enjoyed it... can you write faster??? :P
    February 2nd, 2012 at 12:50pm
  • appley92

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    this is really good :)

    maybe explain a little more about rose and add some more emotion when she talks about her parents dying? idk.

    it was awesome though. i love the story idea :D

    btw im liz.
    February 1st, 2012 at 04:31pm
  • marauderette

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    I loved the story!!! There were a few grammar mistakes but...

    UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE PLEASE??? :P
    February 1st, 2012 at 02:08pm
  • naoedwardo

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    hurry up chey. now now now now now. okay. okay. ♥
    February 1st, 2012 at 12:33pm
  • Riah63

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    i just finished chapter 8 and i already can't wait for more lol :) keep going you are an amazing writer
    January 17th, 2012 at 11:26pm
  • Christiee02

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    Update chey! :) school in a week -.-
    January 14th, 2012 at 01:15pm
  • Synderella28

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    Update again soon! I'd like to see the surprise soon! Pleaseee!
    January 12th, 2012 at 11:16pm
  • Synderella28

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    Update again soon! I'd like to see the surprise soon! Pleaseee!
    January 12th, 2012 at 11:16pm
  • Synderella28

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    Update again soon! I'd like to see the surprise soon! Pleaseee!
    January 12th, 2012 at 11:16pm
  • Riah63

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    i love this :) please update soon
    January 12th, 2012 at 01:16pm
  • Synderella28

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    I like! Update again soon:3 writers block is just your mind saying its too overwhelmed to be creative. Force yourself to take some time to think about your writing and that should help. Just make sure to keep writing no matter how terrible you think it is. Fix later:3 that always helps for me.
    January 11th, 2012 at 04:50am