Okay…so they've got married…I'm sorry that I've asked u so many times…but…it this the end? Well maybe I dnt think so cus if it was the end then wouldn't it have said 'The End' …? I'm sorry, I'm a confused child.... XD. =[
Not specifically for this story, but one about infidelity without stereotypicalized characters i.e., woman cheating her husband = she's a helpless whore. Thankfully your story is a lot more realistic than that.
I only read your first chapter so far, but it's well written, so I'll be subscribing and hoping you'll keep up your work.