July 31st, 2012 at 08:55am
There were a few grammar mistakes, and I feel like a priss for mentioning it but I'm in that english major mood so I apologize for that. xD
It wasn't hard to read with them though. So many people fuss over that kind of stuff but I know for a fact or minds register wha'ts meant to be said because of context. :D
Poor Darren being ambushed by her family! I hate family time. I used to have the same problem when visiting my grandmother. She was a cheek pincher hardcore. You'd have rosy cheeks not from the cold but from her violent fingers >.>
“Don’t make eye contact with anyone. I’ll be back with drinks.” BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA xD It's like battle ground rule number one. oh my word :O I want a big family like this now... And then then THEN you blame him for making eye contact with someone xD I'm so enjoying this moment, it's like three sentences long but it has me laughing so hard. Bravo :O
GET SOME DARREN *squeeeeeee* Mistle toe kisses are the best :O
That was cute. xD Utterly cute.
You're a really great writer!
I'm jealous!