Dark Prince - Comments

Just a tip, watch your tenses. You both keep switching from past to present tense. "I whisper" "I explained". Things like that, it can be tricky to realise, so just try to pay attention to that detail. Otherwise a good story :)

This was awesome :D

omg this is so good :D

You have to update right now!!! :D

I'll try to make my chapter long :)

Y is the chapter not longer :P ive been waiting ages

Good job partner ;) a great chapter and I love your writing. After my turn, update soon :)

Really good story. You must continue writing it. You're going a great job.

If only there was a 'like' button on Mibba comments...
Those last two comments would be liked by me ^.^

AWE!! thanx everyone for the support! :3

Thanks everyone, I'll try to carry on with those tips, I noticed the same thing!! Love you all! :) Thank you commenting and subscribing! Means a lot! :D For Amber Autumn, thank you for tht. I try ^.^

I agree entirely with Amber Autumn, its an amazing story idea. And I love everything about it :D the only thing is that every few sentences you should have a break in the passage, it just makes it easier to read . Can't wait to see more, I subscribed ^_^

Love it!
I subscribed :D
This is like the perfect story to read on a rainy day. Definitely my kind of story.
Seriously-YOU HAVE TO KEEP WRITING!!!! :D
I like your authors notes too, they're really nice.

This needs to be updated.
Like, NOW.

yay u read it!!! :3

Good job Chikadeedeedee5! I thought you did great! :)

Thanks guys ;)
Heads up; Theres a girl :o Her perspective too :)
Glad you like it!! Sure will, and enjoy the rest! :)

Guiiieeeeeesssssssssss♥
I absolutely love it. Like, a lot.
Keep writing ! (:

I like it. It's dark and mysterious, leaves me wanting more. Leaves me wanting to know more about Ashtian. I'm guessing he was cursed with a vamperism of some sort, or that's what the immortality makes me think of. If he isn't; I appologize, either way, the story so far is very captivating.

Keep on writing! ^.^