Crooked - Comments

I got goosebumps when she was going up to meet simon haha I was scared for her but it was a surprisingly good chat and now she's their assistant and niall's girlfriend ;)
Can't leave out that bit!
I would leave a longer comment but my stupid nook keeps deleting what I say djdjdjdjc grrr
ah well can't wait to see what happens next. I am really looking forward to "meeting" angie :p

So happy to see the update! I understand how she feels, I'd be terrified to meet Simon too, but I'm glad it all went well. When I read I'd pay cold hard cash to see them kiss or something. I laughed and then said "wouldn't we all!", because really, who wouldn't want to see that? I ship Harry and Louis so much it's weird lol, anyway I loved the update and I can't wait to see what happens next! :D

If I was her I would be scared to meet Simon.

I really like this plot.
Different, refreshing... and I've never thought about Niall and Louis in this light before.
Keep it up! :]

So glad you updated!
Hmm...I think Cass will get some hate but I don't see it going really far because she's nice enough but who knows...
AND GAH LOUIS WHY DO YOU HAVE TO LIE YOU LITTLE TROLL!? I mean wouldn't Niall mention that he carried her in eventually? He should've known better. tsk tsk.'
Oh goodness I can't even imagine what Simon is going to say to her...

So thrilled with the update! I hope Cass doesn't get attacked by fans or anything! I did think the fact that Niall was the one who carried her in was adorable. I'm rooting for them, although Louis seems to be showing interest too so I don't know! I am also really interested to know how that meeting with Simon will go. :)

as to what Reece [Harry Styles;]said up dere; Silex like shit.

OHMYGOD LOUIS IS SO NAUGHTY. Like, no wonder that boy had to go to jail! I bet he was creeping hopin' to get a sneek of dear Cass.
his head had moved to my thigh
Niall you sneaky little bastard how dare you cheat on Zayn?! If Niall was awake that'd be an extremely awkward or erm, sexual situation hehe. I mean waking up and finding your face- let me not finish that sentence ~_~

I should stop. But asdfgh. I feel the urge to be team Niall but Louis is so cheeky... GAH. I'm not going to choose until more information is presented so update, babe. c;

I literally said "Oh my god" out loud when Louis came into the bathroom. He freaking would and then of course he switched seats with Harry! Geez gdfjgdkfjl I don't know what to think of Louis but kfjksdfj I can't help but like him too XD and the whole scene of them taking pictures of them while they were sleeping was cute and of course when she fell on Harry. Gah. This was just such a freaking cute chapter. I can't get over it.

I love you Alex! I really do! Amazing<3 But you knew that already baby ;)

Everything about this was cute! From the beginning when Harry and Niall were sleeping on her lap, to the Harry/Zayn/Liam (Zariam?) at the end, I just loved it all!

LOUIS BEBZ LEMME LOVE YOU LONG TIME.
Niall and Cass are just so adorable.
Riall is jealous right now ;D
lolol I bet people think I just spelled Niall's name wrong.

Loved the update, especially the hook at the end about Tommo looking crestfallen :(
still team Niall though~

You are killing me here! Poor Louis! Well that's sure to cause some tension between them but a promise is a promise and Louis knw that. She should have made Harry move because I don't think he would care as much...Anyway I hope you update before you leave because waiting for a week would suck so much!

Ahhh Ioved the update! I thought it was adorable how Niall was so happy to sit next to her on the plane! And poor Lou omg. But oh well, in the end he still has Harry xD

Whoo the bright colors kinda of shocked me but thats because I am so used to darker ones. It was nice though, great banner.

The summary was simple, seems like the typical hate that I love you story but I liked how it's named after his teeth.

I enjoy when story do that for some reason and I'm curious to see how you weave that into the story.

ohmygod. Alex - you did not.
you updated on my birthday.
what is this. what even.

stop making your characters love Zayn when their supposed to love others D:
cough.Niall.cough.
I know Zayn's just one sexy motherfucker and I can totally see why she'd be so shy but c'mon. Give Niall some love here<3

I SEE NIALL DOE.
I see him being all sneaky, sitting next to Cass for the next 22 hours. Too bad he's not slutty styles then they'd be in the bathroom
okay, yeah I should stop XD

please update soon! I can't wait to see how she'll react when Niall makes the moves on her ~__~
I'm also glad that her brother let her go so peacefully and he didn't try to call her parents or girlfriend to make her stay and gosh, I love this story :D

I was so happy to see this get updated! I love the way you described all of the boys! My best friend and I do actually describe Zayn's looks as godly, so I laughed at that. I also quite love the name of this new chapter lol. I can't wait for more! (oh and I love the outfit she's wearing!)

I was trying not to laugh out loud when she described Zayn(I'm reading in the hallway at school so I would get some weird looks). I love how you protray each of the boys...it really stays true to who they are and I've read a lot of fanfics that don't even sound like them. It drives me crazy!
Anyway, I really hope Niall and Louis insist on sitting with her on the plane...then they would really have to get to know each other :p

I absolutely adore this!! Cannot wait for more. :)

I loved the update! My favorite parts were Lou and his suggestiveness. Too funny. And then the bit with her ringtone! I loved that that's how she figured out who they were. I can't wait for more! :)

I'm going to make comments as I read...
"I don't like seeing pretty girls upset." - I seriously awed out loud. I think my little brother even heard me. It may be cheesy but it's cute.
YES HARRY AND LOUIS! I'm kind of flailing all over the place this is not normal for me. I don't know why but I really feel connected to Cassidy...that sounds kind of weird but I can picture everything happening in my head like I am the character. It takes a lot for me to really identify with the main character so props to you!
Now I'm at the part where her phone is ringing and "What Makes You Beautiful" is playing...oh dear how does she not know!? Oh geez I can only imagine what she was feeling when she figured out it was them. I'd start blushing like crazy.
Wow! I don't remember ever making a comment so long! Normally I say one or two things...weird. Anyway, I really do love the story and can't wait to see what is to come!