Take A Breath - Comments

  • Wow Marty!
    Well first off, i just would like to say that i have read all of the prequel to your story just today and i am just starting to read this one, but, the problem is there is only 2 chapters, i'm already hooked, leaving it with a cliffhanger, but i need more!
    I just love your style of writing, initially i didn't get hooked with the other story but i kept reading because of your writing style. I love it. So this is a compliment to you, also in hope that you get another chapter out.
    I love how i can just picture being in that situation! Its so real. Its also so possible.
    I need to know what happens in that classroom, and isn't that true, something bad always happens when you have a fight with some.
    Good job beautiful!
    Please update.
    January 11th, 2012 at 04:25am