Unexpected - Comments

Super cute story! I didn't even realize it was a fanfiction until I read the other comments...

I really enjoyed this as a whole. :) I'm not familiar with the fandom, but I did enjoy this nonetheless. I like how the ending reassured Anna later, I'd hate for that to be a mystery on what his feelings were for her. I love happy endings, so you've got me there. As for criticism, you're pretty much a very good writer, so I don't have to say much. xD There are a couple capitalization errors with tags, but that's it. A quick look-over will catch those.

Thanks for entering the contest, anyway. :) Good luck on future ones!

Oh my God, oh my God, oh my GOD, this was absolutely adorable. I mean, illegally adorable. I'm a huuuge fan of American Horror Story and I've rarely seen any "cute" fics, featuring Evan Peters/Tate, so this one - as your title says - is completely unexpected, hehe c: Totally adorable how you had them as old friends, rather than having them being complete strangers. I also loved how he asked her out; aww! I'd really like someone to ask me out like that, but I digress, bahah. This was absolutely adorable and really well-written. Kudos! Great job c: <3

Hahah, this was duper cute. I don't have really cristicism to over considering it's just a cutesy one shot, but cutesy it was. I was expecting it to be celebrity based, like she recognized him a celebrity and I was like oh boy, but I thought it was cute how you had them be old friends from high school. It was adorable how he asked her out and I feel so lame because I haven't got much to say. But very cute piece.

SO CUTE!

I don't even watch American Horror Story, and I don't talk to that chica up there ^ all that much, but this was so adorable, how could I not love it? The way you made her ramble was wonderful and I thought it was funny in a cute way.

"I'm sorry. I'm doing it again,"

Oh, goodness.

I like how you included the bit about their past, so it didn't seem totally random that he was talking to her. I love happy endings! I'm a sucker for them, but it seems like no one wants to write them anymore these days. This is very cute and it was written beautifully. Good job! (:

THIS WAS SO ADORABLE! Seriously, the Anna you made is just like me. JUST LIKE ME. Her thoughts and her awkwardness and everything. You did SUCH A GREAT JOB! I'll get to yours as soon as I can. It'll be up by tonight. :)

I really liked it. :)

One shot. 887 words.

First thing I've written in a year, so be find please? (: