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  • misterzanib

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    update, please please please. I'm going insane.
    October 6th, 2012 at 09:23pm
  • nothingpersonal10

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    Update soon this is a really good story
    August 6th, 2012 at 01:50am
  • jly94

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    Awwww, bless how happy Zack is that she wants to call him! Did he notice the scars?? I wonder if thats partly why he gave her his number, he wants her to talk instead!

    Anyway, I'm just theorising! Great wiriting as per usual and I can't wait for more!! :)

    Jen xx
    July 17th, 2012 at 08:41pm
  • emmarulez

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    Forgot to comment on the last chapter, but aww I love how much Zack cares. Those girls are bitches though.
    July 17th, 2012 at 07:49pm
  • becauseiamfree

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    that was cute
    i love how much he cares about her
    THEY SHOULD ACTUALLY KISS THIS TIME
    cant wait for more <3
    July 17th, 2012 at 02:50pm
  • holograms

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    i wonder why they retaliated at that period of time or what exactly brett might've done (or what kelly perceived her to have done) to increase the malevolence kelly reels against her! great update as always. your writing is just too good.
    June 30th, 2012 at 01:07am
  • becauseiamfree

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    can i punch them now!?
    how dare they do that to brett!?
    i wonder what she did though...
    cant wait for more <3
    June 28th, 2012 at 11:47am
  • Lipstick Lullabies

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    Oh My God, Brett is going to be in so much trouble! What if Kelly and her crew think she told Zack? Oh my god! What if Zack confronts them! Update soon!
    June 27th, 2012 at 11:12pm
  • holograms

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    what a great update. i can't wait to see how they interact later on.
    June 22nd, 2012 at 02:42am
  • burn fast glow long.

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    NO. WHAT WAS THAT? NO. JUST NO.
    The whole chapter was adorable, and I love her parents and Zack in it.
    BUT GAHHH. They were SO CLOSE.
    /capital letter angst.
    June 20th, 2012 at 04:12am
  • becauseiamfree

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    Nooooooooo!!!!
    So close!!!!
    June 19th, 2012 at 10:39pm
  • Lipstick Lullabies

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    This chapter is good. I can't wait for the next one! :)
    June 19th, 2012 at 05:58pm
  • jly94

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    Awwww, poor Zacky :( Why did she do that? They would be such a cute perfect couple and everything had gone so well and she ruined it!!!

    Can't wait to see what happens next and how her and Zack react around each other after that.

    Jen xx
    June 19th, 2012 at 05:51pm
  • holograms

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    i loooooooooooved it! (and the new mibba is so bleh.)
    June 19th, 2012 at 05:43am
  • jly94

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    Awww, they are so cute and awkward! I love how naturally their relationship seems to be progressing here and how protective Zack seems towards Brett.

    Really great writing, and I'll recommend it too! :)

    Jen xx
    June 9th, 2012 at 11:06pm
  • blutsteinbattery.

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    oh my poop nuggets, this write is marvelous. <3
    June 5th, 2012 at 03:46pm
  • Justice Rader

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    awe wish u had more time to write.
    *SUBSCRIBED*
    June 5th, 2012 at 03:49am
  • heyJAYhey

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    love love love this story :D
    June 4th, 2012 at 12:20pm
  • becauseiamfree

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    zack is so nice to her
    cant wait for more <3
    June 4th, 2012 at 11:09am
  • Lipstick Lullabies

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    This chapter is nice.. I just don't like the fact that it is kind of a cliffhanger.. I want to know what happens next, so please update soon..
    June 4th, 2012 at 05:30am
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