Not the American Average - Comments

i read this whole book today and i cant sleep. its made me so angry, why cant she just be with James? he is obviously perfect for her and Ben treats her like pure shite. i cant fathom why this fictional story is getting to me but it is. God, i need to stop reading books

Hey, can you still help me with my Ben Bruce story? I'm really stuck. Please?

Im really diggin' this story but question, why doesn't 'Bens girlfriend' have a name?? She's always referred to as girlfriend. XD

Okay seriously? I just want to beat Emma up! This is just wrong! It pisses me off that she still goes back to him! I coudnt finish reading this because it just makes me mad that she is that stupid!

Okay, so I almost read the sequel, but I'm so glad I didn't. I just really want to slap Ems, and give her a good reality check. But, I've been there, and I've done that. So, I can relate. I'm going to go read the sequel now. But, I really hope she didn't do what I think she did.

Oh, this was really good and I couldn't stop reading once I started. I loved this even though I got seriously emotional over a lot of it.

Holy shit, I'm late on this but holy shit! :D

O_0 omfg I can't believe he fucking proposed! That is the last thing I expected! You really know how to keep us on the edge of our seats ;)

Aaaaaaaah !
How am I supposed to feel about this? Somebody please tell me what to do...
Thank you for making a sequel, I mean, with an ending like that.. I nearly died

This story is so amazing, omfg. <3

Okay this is definitely messed up! I mean Ben just seems to use her weakness which is him to get what he wants and when he does, he ditches her to get his dick wet with another whore. What I think she needs to do is get her life together, like find a job that could get her a stead income, stay away from anything to pertains to Asking Alexandria because it seems she keeps getting herself into deeper shit each time she comes into contact with them. Maybe needs someone to open her eyes that whatever relationship she has with Ben or James is very poisonous! She's not moving forward she's actually going backwards! And Ben is only thinking with is dick and not with his head or heart because he would realize how much he hurt ex with his cold and heartless attitude toward her. I can't wait for the next update!

NO wait how is it going to be? this is ending soon? what will I read! this is way to awesome to end!
anyway poor emms, I wish she ends up with ben eventually and ... yeah james.. will ..damn this is hard! but I love it anyway!

Great story! I really hope she ends up with James though :')

Loved it!

Can't wait for he next update!

Asfghjkl! It's so frustrating that things don't turn out the way I want them to! Then again, it's really refreshing to not have a predictable story! Love it!

Maybe I'm the only one that hopes Ben wises up and stops being such a dick to Emma. I feel like they're meant to be. Haha.

She needs to be with James!!! Pretty please :(

Urgh Ben! She's been back in your life for what less than a day and already he screws her over. Shame on him xD. I shall be sad to see the story end.
But yeah! About writing, totally get that with some of the stories I write it's like hmm what am i going to write next kinda thing.

Ben is a major asshole!! I wish she would just fall in love with James and move on lol!! Love the story

someone needs to bitchslap ben.