The Thoughts, Feelings and Doings of a Schizophrenic - Comments

So, I'll start off with your layout. I wasn't blown away by creativity or anything like that, since it was a bit plain. However, I kind of liked the dark colors, and the way it looked, it was pretty good. It didn't affect your writing, though.

The writing was great. I'm not sure what to criticize about it. Seeings as it's from your personal thoughts, and journals, I don't want to say anything bad about it. Not that there is anything bad about what you wrote, it was very good/ Your details are absolutely amazing. They're so in-depth, and almost impeccable. Absolutely flawless. I noticed a few grammatical and spelling errors, but nothing too bad, it didn't stop me from enjoying the story.

Overall, I can say I enjoyed this. You put your thoughts down very well, and this is well-written, and put together, and everything. It's very good.

Layout: 8/10
Writing: 10/10
Overall: 10/10

I've noticed the layouts you use are almost the same for every other story. Maybe if you tried to make another one or request one, it wouldn't be boring or plain.

The summary could have been better. Suspenseful.

I am also schizophrenic so reading this was amazing. Matt. That's my "friend". Seen him for years. This was amazing. Sometimes "they" do make you do things, keep it up.