Hey Niki - Comments

Aw, great ending, a bit sad though. I loved this story despite just finding it floating about Mibba today.

Aw, this is brilliant. I love the characters and their personalities, and I love how it's written. The story itself seems to have a calm/somber vibe to it. I'm not sure if that's what you were going for, but it's nice.

I love it!!!!!!! Update pretty please???

Updaaaattteeee :3 It's really good!

its simple and innocent . i like it.

Woah, no comments? Why?

Anyway, the layout suits the story extremely well. But I'm not here to talk about layouts. The summary was pretty cute. It kind of gave me a hint as to what it would be about, but I still had no clue.

I just read the first chapter now. If I'm not mistaken, her mom killed her father. Or something along those lines. I actually really like this story. And the fact that it will be featuring Mikey Way makes me even more happier. I think I'm gonna sub to this. You need to do some swaps so people will read this. I like it.

I'm gonna read the second chapter now. Keep up the good writing.