Hey Niki - Comments

  • Miss.J.isamonster

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    Aw, great ending, a bit sad though. I loved this story despite just finding it floating about Mibba today.
    July 25th, 2012 at 11:42pm
  • Miss.J.isamonster

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    Aw, this is brilliant. I love the characters and their personalities, and I love how it's written. The story itself seems to have a calm/somber vibe to it. I'm not sure if that's what you were going for, but it's nice.
    July 25th, 2012 at 08:50pm
  • abbymac13

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    I love it!!!!!!! Update pretty please???
    July 25th, 2012 at 09:05am
  • LaerkeTimeLow

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    Updaaaattteeee :3 It's really good!
    July 6th, 2012 at 10:17pm
  • N5.106.237.41

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    its simple and innocent . i like it.
    April 18th, 2012 at 02:03am
  • Robin 'The Sidekick'

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    Woah, no comments? Why?

    Anyway, the layout suits the story extremely well. But I'm not here to talk about layouts. The summary was pretty cute. It kind of gave me a hint as to what it would be about, but I still had no clue.

    I just read the first chapter now. If I'm not mistaken, her mom killed her father. Or something along those lines. I actually really like this story. And the fact that it will be featuring Mikey Way makes me even more happier. I think I'm gonna sub to this. You need to do some swaps so people will read this. I like it.

    I'm gonna read the second chapter now. Keep up the good writing.
    February 18th, 2012 at 01:50am