Ways to Lose - Comments

  • n. josten

    n. josten (1270)

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    Ghoul of 2016
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    24
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    United States
    I’m here as the new judge for the ‘10 Ways To…’ contest.

    I’m not sure where you were planning on going with this so I didn’t have much to go off, but I did like all the characters’ dynamics with each other. The entire game of truth or dare was amusing because they were just all coming up with the most ridiculous stuff and actually just so impressed with themselves for it. I mean, honestly, I laughed when the best dare Frank had was for Mikey to take off his glasses and everyone oh’d like he dared him to do something ~risque~ instead. It was really funny, all their relationships with each other. Their dialogue and actions were very natural and realistic, I think.

    I like how simplistic your writing style is because you don’t make your prose flowery. You’re straight to the point and it’s a very underrated kind of writing style, so I really enjoyed. It created a nice and effortless flow. So good job!
    July 2nd, 2017 at 11:40am