To Run - Comments

Very well written.

So comment swap bought me here and I'm happy it did. I subscribed to this and can't wait to continue reading it. I like how in the beginning you made the kids act like kids. Mostly people are dramatic when it comes to kid's in their story. I like already where this story is going. Can't wait for the next chapter.

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I like the beginning of the story,cant wait to read more.
And you have such a clean grammer,no mistakes,well from what I saw. Just awsome story.
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I really like your story and i agree with v it was a little confusing. not sure if you meant it the way or now and your grammar is excellent. The flashback in the begging it was a great idea. and it gives you a sense that you have know this person for a little longer then what the story is, and again, a lovely story:) keep up the good work:) I'm subscribing:)

Wow really good. Impecable writing style and nice story. I like the concept is original and creative something I really appreciate. I'm subscribed! Keep up the good work. :) End of chapter 2 was a little confusing for me the last handful of sentences but hopefully that will be cleared up. Have a lovely day.

Wow! Great start! I really like the detail you put into the story but how you kept a lot of the mystery to your characters.

Great grammar!!!! I love you for that!!! :-D

I'm subscribing and can't wait for the next chapter!

First off, I want to thank you for having such excellent grammar. It's rare to find someone who knows what a comma is, let alone how to use it.

That being said, this story sounds awesome. I really like the way you're portraying your characters and the way that you started it with a flashback.

Keep up the good work! I'm subscribing!

OHFUCKINGGOD. IT WAS AWESOME. <3<3<3<3<3<3
Keep it up! ;D
And I was right! It's about running.

I haven't read yet, but I'm guessing it's about running?
Maybe, I don't know. Based on the Summary and the picture for the title, I'm guessing it is. "To Run...it was what she did best." I think it's about running! :D Tell me if I'm right? Thanks, I'll read it.
I hope its good, I don't like seeing it when writers are worse than me, because I suck at it. ;c
Anyways, I hope you did a good job!

I really like the layout, the background looks like you're looking down at the sand on a beach, which goes perfectly with the dominant photo, which is adorable.

The story is adorable, and very well described. I can picture it perfectly.

I love it, keep doing great on it.

Can you update this soon? Because this is amazing. I read it and i love the writing in the prologue and i think this story has some real potential. I didn't see any significant grammatical errors and i like the kids. please, update soon