Colder Than My Heart If You Can Imagine - Comments

I come from the magical Comment Swap... Definitely reread this and fix some mistakes. I'm not telling you this to be a jerk either, I mean it. You have something really really good here. But you write 'courtesy' at one point, and if that's what you mean, fine, but 'curiosity' would be better, and it's probably what you meant.
I do like this however. I don't know the people or the songs, but its likable and well thought out.
Keep writing :)