This was so beautiful that I am literally almost at a loss for words. I am very happy that I got the chance to read it. I love how you made Alana's character. At first, she reminded me of Rachel from Columbine for some odd reason. I really admire her, though. I saw no mistakes and the flow of your writing is almost god sent. I find this so easy to read, and I plan on reading much more of your work. Amazing job!
February 8th, 2012 at 10:50pm