A Silent Death For Rosaline. (Rewritten.) - Comments

I think the concept to this was interesting- unique, i've never read anything that started out with someone staring at their own dead body.

I think maybe when shes describing how her body looks, maybe you could replace 'my' with 'it', separating herself from the body, I think that'd be more effective.

I thought the part with the letter was very touching, and it was a nice way to relay the details of this ghost and how she died.

All in all I liked it and I didn't seen any mistakes I dont think. :]