This is such an excellent story! I absolutely love your portrayal of Damon! He seems so realistic and he acts exactly like he does in the books and TV show, which is great. I love that you stayed true to his character! I really like the prologue and the way you use it to set up Wormwood. It gets the feeling of the town in the head early on, which is great! And I love how secretive everything is in the first chapter. It’s just all so intriguing, and it really makes me want to keep reading. Nobody will tell Charlotte anything! I also really love the way you mix dialogue and description together. It works really well!
September 23rd, 2012 at 03:24am