Going Camping - Comments

Dear author, you could have made the summary way more interesting and also it would be better if you edit it because you have a few writing typos. The material is quite raw and the descriptions are simple. I liked the ending though. Just an idea but you could turn it to a friends with benefits full length story. ~Marian.

Dear author, you could have made the summary way more interesting and also it would be better if you edit it because you have a few writing typos. The material is quite raw and the descriptions are simple. I liked the ending though. Just an idea but you could turn it to a friends with benefits full length story. ~Marian.