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  • AddictedToYourLove

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    Update update update update update update update update update update update update please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very Happy
    July 7th, 2013 at 07:27pm
  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    GIRL I FORGOT THIS STORY EXISTED AND NOW THAT I HAVE REMEMBERED THAT IT DOES, PLEASEEEEEE UPDATE. I'LL LOVE YOU FOREVER.
    December 22nd, 2012 at 07:48pm
  • surfchicka77

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    PLEASE UPDATE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    July 19th, 2012 at 08:23pm
  • punkurself

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    Ai they are so cute
    Please update
    Such a cute couple(:
    July 14th, 2012 at 08:03am
  • appley92

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    Totally agree with Magical Normality!

    And as for the story, you already know I freakin love it!!! So cute and so good :D

    Something's going down on Christmas. I can feel it :)
    April 22nd, 2012 at 05:08am
  • Magical Normality

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    I'm surprised you don't have many comments because this is a great story.
    March 23rd, 2012 at 07:42am
  • MissMissy

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    I plan on keeping it centered around Mel and Lance and their relationship, but Meg and Tony are crucial pieces to what goes on in TLAS, and I just wanted to develop their character NOW instead of being like, oh yeah! And so these two randomly do this....Y'know? Plus, you will see Meg talk about Mel and Lance's relationship with her more too, since she's been with Lance now for longer than she's ever seen Lance be with someone (:

    So yeah, that's my thought process - it is seeming to go all over the place, but hopefully that'll clear up :)
    March 20th, 2012 at 01:10am
  • appley92

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    so good :)

    im trying to figure out who you are gonna focus on in the story. part of me lovessss the mel and lance ness :D and the other part of me wants to see whats gonna go on with meg. unless youre gonna do both :) maybe tony will be like secretly working for the other side, but he really falls for meg. or ..idk. your story, i just eek! im so excited to keep reading!

    <3
    March 19th, 2012 at 01:29pm
  • MissMissy

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    Hmm...interesting thought :)
    -Lauren.
    March 15th, 2012 at 04:53am
  • heyNazareth

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    i don't if this sounds crazy buuutttttt....... i think mel and lance should have a pregnancy scare.----lol, that does sound crazy..
    March 15th, 2012 at 01:00am
  • Magical Normality

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    You should really continue! I like your writing.
    March 6th, 2012 at 06:37am
  • appley92

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    Yes they should most definitely take a trip back !!! :) that would be cute. Like her first official meeting-the-pops sort of boyfriend. Maybe he would know her dad from like connections with the mafia and stuff :) hahaha. Idk I'm getting ahead of myself :D

    <3
    February 21st, 2012 at 05:35am
  • appley92

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    eeeeek go on go on go on :DD
    February 16th, 2012 at 05:00pm
  • surfchicka77

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    Plzzzz upload more its rlly good!!!!!!!!! =D
    February 3rd, 2012 at 03:37am
  • appley92

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    eeek! you possibly just made me the happiest ive been all week :DDD

    i love it. absolutely love it. keep going! :)))

    <3
    January 15th, 2012 at 02:37am
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