This was a strange story but amazing all the same! I don't usually read horror stories but I honestly loved this! I think you incorporated the sickness well and went with a different approach. I love the italicized words in the middle. You used a lot of descriptive words which made this seem almost real. I think horror stories need to be explained to the T and you did just that! I feel bad for her :/ You can tell how traumatizing the entire night was for her. This was seriously perfect! :)
I don't usually read horror stories but I honestly loved this! I think you incorporated the sickness well and went with a different approach.
I love the italicized words in the middle.
You used a lot of descriptive words which made this seem almost real. I think horror stories need to be explained to the T and you did just that!
I feel bad for her :/ You can tell how traumatizing the entire night was for her.
This was seriously perfect! :)