August 7th, 2013 at 02:59am
You know, you wrote this and I'm kind of jealous of you having the ability because I've tried this in every Creative Writing class I've taken on several different occasions and I just can't do it.
I think it was amazing and heartfelt how you wrote about this one singular object that meant so much to you. You described the pocket watch so well, and I think we can all relate to having something that means a lot to us, even if it seems a little silly to other people.
Your writing is wonderful, and I like how you left it a little mysterious. It added a nice effect. :)
Thank you, took me a while to figure out what I wanted to do with it and trying to get everything set.