This is a beautiful piece and had me just about in tears. One part I was curious about was the final paragraph where you say "soap the dirt of living" could u clarify a little by what you mean? And in that paragraph are you speaking as if your significant other is deceased, as you briefly mentioned? I'm just curious. It doesn't affect the piece at all I would just like to know. Overall very good. You're a very talented writer
February 10th, 2012 at 05:29pm