Nightmares - Comments

This is lovely. The words were perfectly picked and it flowed quite well. The layout suited it too!

I love the layout.

It's well written, too.

You did a very good job on the layout.

I liked how simple you wrote this. It explained the disorder within a few paragraphs and sentences and it was informative. You gave great imagery, and worded it very nicely. It's actually pretty cool how short that is, yet how you managed to teach me a lot about the characters. I like short writing like this, because it shows how much talent the writer has. And you definitely have that.

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