Wow- I found this on the story contest page and clicked on it out of curiosity. The message it carried was strong. I can't believe it was only around 500 words! Great job- I hope I can make something this inspiring with so few letters. I read the other comments as well, out of curiosity again, and I do think the lyrics are a bit excessive. If they were actually in a song, it would be great to have a link at the bottom. =] Otherwise, it might be better to just fit a stanza inside.
September 27th, 2012 at 06:47am