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  • samithurman

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    This is amazing. Pleaaaaaaase keep writing. <3
    August 5th, 2013 at 06:52am
  • BethTheCarrotNinja

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    Ohmygosh!!!!!!! I freaking love this story!!!!! xD please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please write more now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Pleas please please please please please please pelase please for me!!!!!!!!!!! <3333333333
    April 29th, 2013 at 05:50am
  • mariahcathrynx3

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    liking this so far c: can't wait for an update <3
    January 21st, 2013 at 05:38pm
  • Angela415162

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    Pretty freaking good
    November 15th, 2012 at 05:40am
  • turtlesandtrains

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    please please please pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaase update!!
    October 20th, 2012 at 06:43am
  • Lunalunita

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    please update!!!
    September 10th, 2012 at 04:31pm
  • KatieBVB

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    PLEASE UPDATE!!! I love this :D
    September 2nd, 2012 at 11:50pm
  • Lunalunita

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    I NEED MORE !!!!!!!!!!

    UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    August 28th, 2012 at 07:14pm
  • BlackStainedMirrors

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    Hehe.. yes. This is very good. :3 I love this shit already...
    XD I have no idea why but imagining them all eating chorizo made me laugh. All is good, but I agree with KilljoyBekah you should separate your paragraphs :3
    Update soon!

    ~Pansy Xo
    August 28th, 2012 at 01:37pm
  • KilljoyBekah

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    Okay, I think you're a good writer and this story is great, but you should separate your sentences and paragraphs to make it slightly easier to read. However, I like how you change points of view and focus on using dialogue to tell the story. It's different to anything else I've read. Well done :)
    August 20th, 2012 at 09:41pm
  • PTVFangirlForLife

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    I Can See This Being One Of The Stories I Get Completely Lost In... ^_^ I Likess! :D
    August 20th, 2012 at 07:19am
  • squidgylovesaustlan

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    please update, I NEED more! c:
    August 20th, 2012 at 12:10am
  • Alex Suarez

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    yeyeye continue with this please!
    August 19th, 2012 at 01:05am
  • EmilyM

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    i like c: update more!
    August 19th, 2012 at 12:57am
  • kellinpedoquinn

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    oooooh I really like where this is maybe going! UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE hAHA :D tony and vic are cute
    August 18th, 2012 at 11:36pm
  • kellinpedoquinn

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    la la la love this story
    August 18th, 2012 at 11:36pm
  • SpencerA7xVengence.

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    update soon!
    August 18th, 2012 at 02:55pm
  • Billiethemisfit

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    Omg update soon please? :3
    August 18th, 2012 at 10:05am
  • kellinpedoquinn

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    continue please?! <3
    August 12th, 2012 at 10:15pm
  • PTVFangirlForLife

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    Awhh!
    More?
    August 8th, 2012 at 07:45am
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