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  • Shadow14

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    I'm still reading this!

    I'm glad Jasmine called Jimmy. He deserved to know what was going on.
    December 24th, 2012 at 12:07am
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    Well that was eventful holy shit! At least Malak realized she lost her memory. But I don't see how Jasmine doesn't want him to go to jail! I know I would, even if I lost the memory of it. I wish it was that easy sometimes.
    October 16th, 2012 at 02:57pm
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    I knew it was Malak! I'm kind of curious as to what she wants to talk to him about though.. I would have just killed him then and there. But she definately needs to reply back to Lucas or something. Maybe he'll think something is wrong if he can't reach her?
    September 15th, 2012 at 05:56pm
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    Malak was actually nice to Jasmine? Protected her and everything...I never would have guessed that from him, but with his parents I can see why he is the way he is.. I think he still remembers the promise he made to Jasmine. It may be deep, deep down inside, like subconscious memory, but I think he remembers.
    September 14th, 2012 at 02:17pm
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    Jasmine's fucking mom told Greg what she was wearing?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Please say I'm wrong!! What the fuck?!?!?! I love the violence of it all though!! I know for sure that there will be more violence!
    September 8th, 2012 at 06:39pm
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    They should have let Edgar and Nick kick that Greg dude's ass! If anyone said that to my friends I would have kicked their ass, despite my friends telling me not to, especially if they didn't stop doing it.
    September 3rd, 2012 at 07:25am
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    Yay! Jimmy kicked a dochebag's ass! I want to know who the hell did that to Britain! Zacky's going to be so frantic/pissed/scared when he finds out about what happened to her.. It's getting really interesting now! I love it!!
    September 2nd, 2012 at 06:39pm
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    @ GirlWithNoSoul
    I love every chapter!
    Alright! As usual, I'll read it when you post it! :)
    September 2nd, 2012 at 08:44am
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    @ Shadow14
    Maybe, maybe not ;D
    But I know you are going to love the next chapter!
    It should be up soon! So you wont have to wait! (:
    September 2nd, 2012 at 07:58am
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    Damnit Jimmy, you shouldn't go running off like that! I have a feeling about this, I don't know what is is or why just yet, but I'm sensing some violence coming from Jimmy, like he's going to get into a fight or something.
    September 2nd, 2012 at 07:52am
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    Not gonna lie, I might be sorta, kind of happy Maxine's dead. She was a bitch, yeah she apologized but still. But maybe that's just me and how I view things. BUt I love how Zacky is so loyal and protective of Britian. As for Dillon shooting Ally, I never really saw that coming but Ally was smart to wear a vest.
    August 31st, 2012 at 02:25pm
  • Shadow14

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    It's been 5 months but I'm still reading it. I see how you are though, write a chapter and leave a cliffhanger haha
    August 30th, 2012 at 10:26am
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    I can't believe that this has finally come to an end... :'( But you did a FANTASTICALLY AMAZING job at this. I absolutely love it.
    March 17th, 2012 at 08:27am
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    Well then....GOOD JOB! :')
    March 16th, 2012 at 09:55pm
  • OurDeal

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    Ummm....why does this feel like this might be some horrific nightmare....
    March 11th, 2012 at 08:10pm
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    Awesome on getting your liscense!

    I was wondering the whole time if she were dead or not, but I didn't think you would kill off one of the main characters. I love how Amie left to go kick the shit out of Maxine! You know I love a good bashing. I have a few ideas as to who's P.O.V. that was in.. I think it could be Amie just cuz she wasn't in hysterics and didn't like them talking in past tense about Jasmine, but she did bash Maxine saying Jasmine would want this to happen. I'd say Jimmy cuz he remained optimistic but he didn't want to believe Dillon. I'm not entirely sure who's it was though. Those are only a couple of who I think might be the mystery P.O.V.
    March 11th, 2012 at 06:20pm
  • Sugarplum_19

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    Way to go Amie nd that was a close call I really thought she was dead!!
    March 11th, 2012 at 05:38pm
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    I'm kinda lost now with all the dream and hospital suff
    March 11th, 2012 at 04:24am
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    Poor Jimmy!! Jasmine come back..... You can blame it all on Maxine!!!
    March 10th, 2012 at 02:03am
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    Way to be Maxine.....
    March 10th, 2012 at 12:49am