Cruel Fate - Comments

She better not say no

I LOVE it so update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ME so happy that they are out of the BIG HOUSE

Poor Amie. Her family's being killed off one by one. I can't imagine what she's going through. On the bright side, Britain got our boys out of jail :) Gotta love those police. Britain and Zacky are going on a (somewhat) date :) WOO!

To the Author's Note: I can so see Dillon singing that in the car! I'm not all too big on patience but I can wait.

I can only imagine what Amie's family must be going through, but I do understand her anger. I love it, although it could leave to regrets (not that I think she'll regret bashing the dip shits) or someone getting hurt (which is perfectly ok if it's those dip shits that get hurt). I would probably keep more than just a crow bar in the trunk of my car, just saying! I'm glad that the guys are finally out of jail. I hope Dillon and Britain catch them soon!

OH DAYUM! SHIT'S GONNA HIT THE FAN! O.o

F*ck yeah!! I was right!! I knew she was talking about Zacky!!
That's a lot of pressure that Britain is dealing with. And finding out everything she just did, that fast! Yeah I have shit's going to hit the fan pretty soon!! :D Hopefully, in a good way (meaning Jenny, Malak, Xavier, Melanie, and whoever else I don't like get bashed. And bashed HARD!!!!)

It brought a smile to my face to know that Jasmine finally beat Melanie's face in!!!!!! :)

Yes! More bashing!!! I f*cking love it!!!!!!!!

Dude, I'm quoting your story. Talk shit. Get hit. Best quote ever. CAN I HAVE IT?! Yes? Maybe? Hopefully your Internet keeps working so you won't have to go all Val on it :)

YEAH JASMINE AND AMIE! WAY TO BE BAD ASS BITCHES! :D

I love the bashing! And the threatening! It's very entertaining! :D I hope they listen to Val or else sh*t's going to hit the fan!! hahaha

I love the last two chapters and really wish I had a friend like Amie. She is so BA

Way to go Val! o.O

Omg. I love Val. she is amazing. Scaring the fuck out of Jenny >:) I very much enjoyed the whole beating the hell out of those assholes. Can't wait for another update. <3

It's good to make people fear you right? Especially when you threaten their lives and give them a deadline so Mattie, Johnny, and Lucas can get out of jail. :) Val is badass, man, badass.

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Die you mother fucking bitch, Jenny, die! You sent Mattie, Johnny, and Lucas to jail. *shakes head in shame* Evil bitch.

You update really fast

That's hilarious that they all went over there to bash the shit out of them. Heck, I would too!! I hope they find out who really killed Mandy and those kids so they can get Matt, Johnny, and Lucas out of jail.

Okay :) Me loves some ZV...
Jimmy is so fatherly and protective and adorable.