Make You Mine - Comments

Omfg!!! This was the most hottest one shot of Matt I have read in a long time. So much raunch!!! I loved it. I would love to be taken that way by Matt! Lol

Puta merda! Que história fodástica.

Freaking awesome!

This is so awesome, I was sad that it ended lol I feel like this should be a story or something one day...continued?

Oh my goodness!!! I loved this. It was so delicious :)

I know its only meant to be a one shot, but you should consider a sequel one shot to this :D

I absolutely loved that shit! You sure know how to write a hot sex scene! 5 stars babe <3

Holy shit, this was amazing!
First of all, amazing layout. It's truly beautiful...and then this story. Asdfghjkl. I'm such a whore for Matt, really and I was expecting just a good smut, but you gave it a perfect twist! I loved the ending. This is something special! I loved it, great work. :)

Wow! This was amazing and I couldn't agree with everyone else any more. It would make an incredible story. I wish there was more:))

I know it's been said a bit, but you should seriously turn this into a story. It's amazing, and would make an awesome story. Fucking amazing, dear. =)

Um... story please? I'll cry if you don't. Please turn this into a story! :D I loved this! Simply amazing. Loved the story plot also. Not like others I've read. Amazingly detailed also. Please i beg of you, turn this into a story! XD

You write the best one shots I've ever read! As soon as Im done reading I always want more than curse cause it's only a one shot :( you really are a fantastic writer

I agree with sharkbites's comment. It's a one shot for a reason, but this was so fucking hotttt. I think it would make a GREAT story! Pleaseeee think about it. (:

That was so freaking hot. I love how Shadows' was so strong and controlling, but Matt was sweet and loving. The two different sex styles fit very well together.

I LOVED IT

This story is awesome! You are a very good writer :)

This was amazing!

Normally I don't say this because one shots are one shots for a reason, but I think you should seriously considered continuing with this story. I thought it was just going to be the same old sex story, but you gave it a real plot and it would be awesome to see where you could take it. Either way, I really liked this.(:

Oh. My. God. That was soooooo hot. I just fucking loved it, and the fact that you brought vampires into it was pretty fucking cool too. Now I need to find some new ovaries. I'm running out of spares lol. Great job! :D