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  • Patrick Stump

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    I am also dying to find out what happens next...

    Angelic? Even his inner thoughts seemed to mock the way Pete seemed to be turning into a giant pile of mushy emotion.

    I dunno why,but I liked that line xD
    December 4th, 2009 at 08:58am
  • Sean Berry

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    this is really good.

    i'm sad that this is innactive, but i just thought i'd let you know that this story is really good >.<
    January 11th, 2009 at 09:40pm
  • Rooskaya;

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    Pete groaned in pain, and looked down at the boy he was on top of.

    A billion thoughts flashed through his mind at the speed of lightening, but only one stood out amongst them all;

    I’m lying on Patrick.

    That happy thought was quickly forgotten as the boy under him groaned in pain, and mumbled an angry;

    “Get off me.”

    That's it? No more? Please say its lies and your working on the next chapter because this is an amzing Petrick that I'm dying to find out what happens next.

    Can I ask, why was it under Gabilliam?
    April 22nd, 2008 at 09:54pm
  • Oli.

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    haha sweet
    March 17th, 2008 at 02:50pm
  • Oli.

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    ooooooooooooooooh i really like the idea of this more perdy plz?

    xx
    March 16th, 2008 at 03:02pm
  • Your Addiction

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    Hah. Couldn't see that one coming a mile away. No, but it's good. I'd like to read more of it. And yes, I did enjoy it. Subscribing.
    March 16th, 2008 at 10:07am
  • boyscout.

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    New story.
    Everyone's ages are all mixed, they're almost all around the same age.
    Pete and Patrick are both 18, with the exception that Pete's 2 months older than Patrick.
    Enjoy.
    March 16th, 2008 at 08:40am