March 4th, 2012 at 05:04pm
I really like this story, and it helps that I love the way you write. I hope you update soon because I wish to see more :D This fox guy has so much presence I'm practically drowning in it. And the girl, even though I know nothing other than that she likes to write, sounds pretty fantastic too. I'm wondering where this is going and I can't wait to find out.
Please update soon.
.Peace.
Now I have to go through a nd find all the ones that catch my interest!!! (not that I mind) and this on ehas deff. caught my interst!!!
a few spelling errors and gramatical stuffs
annnd there is nooo description of like anyone besides like colton anywhere! haha
and where is her best friend?? (I cant spell her name and Bythe....was that the bff's name???)
and there hasnt been much interaction between characters, just her narating randomnesss