Let It Snow - Comments

  • alyv08

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    Adding on to my comment from about a year ago, I decided to read this story again because I loved it so much. It has a great plot line and I like how the characters had history of their own and like Miss.J.isamonster mentioned in her comment, it's not just sex. My favorite characteristic of Jess' character was that she didn't listen to her mom that being with Zacky was a mistake and stood her ground.
    November 19th, 2014 at 06:12am
  • Miss.J.isamonster

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    Tess is pretty badass, that's something I have to admit to. Her mother sounds exactly like the women in my family so I feel as though I can relate to her on some level. The relationship she has with Zacky is sweet, sorry to his girlfriend, and it's nice to know that they have that amount of attachment without the added feelings. I also like that this story wasn't just sex. They had a history, she ha her nagging mother, there was an epic (and super naked) snowball fight, and the back and forth banter between them cracked me up.
    July 23rd, 2013 at 09:34pm
  • alyv08

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    Found this story through the Comment Swap thing, and I have to say I'm very happy I did. Even though it's a one shot, it's really well written and descriptive, which I love. The layout is an added bonus, I absolutely love it; it's not too extravagant and not too plain and simple, it's perfect. Looks like I have another ZV/A7X-related one shot to add to my recommendations! Great work :)
    November 23rd, 2012 at 10:21am
  • mitty xx

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    I loved it. It was cute and funny. I loved the plot of it and your writing was great. Everything was awesome. <3
    March 15th, 2012 at 03:27am
  • zackyvravageme

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    “So that’s how she found out about everything, like that time you tricked me into accidentally buying gay porn! You bitch, she was on my case about that for six months, asking me if I needed someone to talk to to be open with and letting me know it was okay to be different and shit! You knew I wouldn’t have bought it if you hadn’t pretended to translate it into English like that, and you knew I fucking broke that shit the second I realized what it was! And you still told her?!”

    I LOVED EVERYTHING. I couldn't sop laughing at this part. It was hilarious! You definitely need to keep writing <3
    enjoyed every bit :D
    February 27th, 2012 at 06:11am
  • kiss my sas

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    I really fucking loved this!!!
    Im pretty sure im in love with Tessa and Zacky. I want to have them in my pocket and carry them around when i need a bit of cute!! Fuck, they are just so... perfect together, and mostly because they both know what they want from each other, and how to get it. Its a fucking perfect combo!!!
    And i cant believe this is the first time you've written smut!! You're amazing at it!! Far out! Serious gift right there :P
    This story is just amazing, and I'm so happy you got to enter it in my comp :) I loved every single bit of it!!
    January 25th, 2012 at 05:00am
  • Brain Dead Bipolar

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    I would really enjoy this ten times even more than I already did, if you were to make this longer than a one-shot. I absolutely loved reading this, and you could never tell that this was your first time writing smut. It was so well written and I honestly wish I could write like that, I've been working on some smut and I just... you did wow.

    I'm not usually into Zacky fics, but this one was absolutely awesome. I really would love to see more of it.
    January 20th, 2012 at 02:05am
  • paralumana

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    Holy geez it's a long one! O_O But I like it so far, frankly ^_^
    I'm not done the whole chapter (half-way there, I swear), but I promise I will finish it (I don't break promises). I just thought I'd give you a comment first 'cause it might take me a while to finish zee chaptie.

    I think the layout is pretty and cold (like, cool and frosty kinda cold), and I love the title font! :D I don't really read band fanfics (big shocker, eh?), but this one's an exception (I honestly dont know why i'm feeling generous today). Last but not least, my favourite part:
    ”DAMN SEXY GUITARIST WITH THE ABSOLUTELY AMAZING FINGERS.”
    i was lmao XD
    January 18th, 2012 at 12:50am
  • russian pirouette

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    When I first clicked on the link of your story, my immediate reaction was how pretty your layout was! Truth be told, it is one of the finest ones I've seen on Mibba.

    Secondly, I love how descriptive you were with everything. My favorite parts of the story were the dialogue between Tess and her mother and the sign that Tess made for Zacky at the airport. I couldn't help but to laugh!

    Overall, this was a beautifully written one-shot. It would be awesome if we could see a full length story about this couple. :)
    January 18th, 2012 at 12:44am
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    First of all, I love the layout. It was so simple and elegant, I love the text at the top.

    The first paragraph already had a smile on my face, you worded it so well and really captured the feelings so quickly without being overly descriptive, which I liked. I also really enjoyed the conversation between Tess and her mum, it was really realistic, how they annoy each other but clearly they don't hate each other, which is refreshing to read as too many stories have hate relationships between the children and their parents. One thing which seemed to stand out was that you kept repeating she was blonde. I think you only need to mention it once, maybe twice.

    I did laugh at what was written at the sign, I think that was pretty cool. The smut worked pretty well, and I liked how you worked in him asking about the pill, because it shows responsibility and makes it more realistic, and all of it flowed really well.

    The ending was quite sweet, and I like the tattoo and the meaning behind it, it's good to see a smut story where the characters have feelings for each other more than just lust. good job :)
    January 15th, 2012 at 04:15pm
  • Emrys

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    i love it. it has a great hook, and though i dont listen to this particular band, i love love love this amazing one shot. well done. i love the descriptions and how really detaled (sp?) this is. i like the contrasting elements (i am a fan of hot tubs and snow...). i do wanna know if something happens to furthet their relationship, but i like the cliff hanger. and the message behind this as well. dont just be. live.
    January 13th, 2012 at 06:52pm
  • McKenna Haner

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    First off, for a first time smut writer, pretty good. The snow scene actually made me shiver because I know what it feels like to be pushed into snow (not naked of course) and it's COLD. Lastly, the airport scene at the end made me all warm and fuzzy. Clearly they care for each other and no matter what her mom says, are always going to be "together" in some way, shape, or form. Carpe Diem is one of my favorite sayings and I see it sort of as a pun. Avenged has a song Seize The Day and that's what the saying means in Latin. Great story!
    January 11th, 2012 at 12:08am
  • SaraHorlyk

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    I really really like this! :)
    January 10th, 2012 at 04:52pm
  • sharkbites

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    Can you please seriously consider turning this into a full story? I'm completely obsessed already and I want to know what happens to Tess and Zacky! I get it if you don't want to or can't, just know you'd have one totally ecstatic and loyal reader if you dide.(:
    January 10th, 2012 at 08:01am