Enchanted To Meet You - Comments

This is really sweet! And I really enjoy it! I'm subscribing in case you decide to continue it (Which I highly recommend). :)))

OMG!! you should make it is to a full on story

Ooh! A Louis one-shot! :D okay here's some concrit:
you anymore.” She said - should be a comma and lowercase s. When you write a sentence like this: "I like Lou," I said. instead of a period you put a comma because the brief sentence after the dialogue is describing the talking. So with that in mind instead of you alright?” She asked you should make the s lowercase and so on. I suggest you look over the one-shot and make sure that you don't miss anything.

I saw no spelling mistakes which was good but the spacing was really hard on the eyes, you should make sure to add a space between paragraphs so it doesn't look clustered.

Also you go from third person point of view to first person more than once in the story so it was a bit difficult to keep up with. Re-read maybe?

Other than that Eleanor was a total meani! I can't believe someone would do that to Lou :"( And it saddened me how he was faking his emotions but it did share how much he cares about his fans.. sorta lol. I really like how you didn't go into anything with the girl and Lou, you just left it a bit more mysterious, leaving the relationship up to imagination :) Go Lou! Although one thing I wished you described was when he like her because she was different at the signings, well how was she different? The way she saw through his facade or was it something else?

Hope this helped, liked the one-shot overall! :D