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  • itsparamshayall

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    Honestly, I've read this so far more times than I can count. The way you portray Ari's feelings is just amazing. You're an amazing writer and I really hope you update soon<3
    September 1st, 2014 at 04:41am
  • ruleyourlife

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    Hey i just wanted to say u r such an amazing writer. I love this story lots. And i wanted to know if u suffered or are suffering from depression?
    Im really looking forward to the next update. Hope its sumtime soon. Its been a long time
    July 28th, 2014 at 04:31pm
  • AmericanIcePrincess

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    When I first started reading this story it took me a few tries to get past the first chapter. I've suffered from depression since I was a little girl. I know how it feels and I cried every time I read your words describing Ari's hurt. I know that feeling all too well. I finally decided to sit down and read the entire story, even through the tears. I see that it's been months since you have updated this story but I hope you haven't given up on it. It's nice to see that someone was able to write about an illness that so many people suffer from. Thank you for that. Hopefully someday you will be inspired to continue and finish it.
    April 17th, 2014 at 02:49am
  • ruleyourlife

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    I LOVE THIS SOO MUCH. PLZ PLZ PLZZ UPDATE SOON. I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE OF THIS AMAZING STORY. XOXOXOX <3 :D
    February 17th, 2014 at 09:58pm
  • kristin92

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    Omg I love this story !!!
    February 7th, 2014 at 03:49pm
  • ruleyourlife

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    UPDATE PLEASE!!
    January 7th, 2014 at 07:22pm
  • dancergirl1988

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    I just read this entire thing!! It took me awhile, but it was undoubtedly worth it. I can't wait for you to update this story! Please make it soon if you can :)
    November 30th, 2013 at 03:30pm
  • madds1234

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    This is soooo good! Update soon!!
    November 16th, 2013 at 01:48pm
  • ruleyourlife

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    thank u soo much for updating. cant wait to see what happens. im really glad to know tht james wants to make everything better between the cousins. I truly love this story to death. love how u bought up the Canadian accent. really love it as im Canadian. xoxo cant wait for the next update
    November 2nd, 2013 at 11:16pm
  • katiexlee

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    I truly love this story, James and Ariana are great together. James was really cute trying to figure out what to do for Ariana because she's sick. Can't wait for the next update!
    October 31st, 2013 at 04:29am
  • FleuryVersteeg

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    I honestly haven't been on here in like... months, and I only come back to read this. AND I LOVE IT! It's so good and I just enjoy reading about Ariana and James!
    "'I thought that's what Paul is for.'
    I breathed a laugh, 'Very funny.'" I loved that XD
    And as a Canadian, I totally enjoyed the accent part. Lol.
    October 31st, 2013 at 12:00am
  • FleuryVersteeg

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    I honestly haven't been on here in like... months, and I only come back to read this. AND I LOVE IT! It's so good and I just enjoy reading about Ariana and James!
    "'I thought that's what Paul is for.'
    I breathed a laugh, 'Very funny.'" I loved that XD
    And as a Canadian, I totally enjoyed the accent part. Lol.
    October 31st, 2013 at 12:00am
  • dogandbutterfly

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    Glad you're back, this is an awesome story...plus that description of James, in the grass...holy moly. He is a beautiful thing...
    October 30th, 2013 at 06:07pm
  • dreamerforever

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    I'm so glad you updated! I really liked the chapter! I understand how shitty writer's block too.
    October 29th, 2013 at 04:47pm
  • llinzerella

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    Ahhhhhhhmygahhhhd. I haven't commented on this story but I LOVE IT. Ariana is SO TOUGH but James.....the greatest in this story, non? I could faint at James Neal in this story - SO willing to tough it out for her and love her - I am literally SWOONING. Totally hear you on the writer's block and hope it goes away SOON!
    October 29th, 2013 at 06:02am
  • theoairplane

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    Thanks for the update! I hope your writer's block has started to dissipated. There's nothing worse than being stuffed up mentally (and in Ariana's case physically). Can't wait to read more!
    October 29th, 2013 at 04:49am
  • ruleyourlife

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    love this story soo much and im dying to find out wat happens next. would be wonderful if u updated. plzz update. or atleast tell us when the next update will be so I can have a peace of mind. <3
    October 28th, 2013 at 09:52pm
  • theoairplane

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    I've never actually commented on a story before but I wanted to tell you how wonderful this is! I read it in its entirety in two days. I do hope you chose to continue it! :)
    October 23rd, 2013 at 04:19am
  • weheartpuck

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    Miss this story! Hopefully an update soon? :)
    September 24th, 2013 at 04:54am
  • ruleyourlife

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    plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon im dying. i wanna know wats gonna happen soo bad.
    September 22nd, 2013 at 11:12pm