I don't usually care for fan-fiction stories; But I really like this one~ I also haven't seen too many stories that had to do with the Carribean trilogy. I also like that Robin is an average girl since, I was under the impression that all fan-fiction original characters were perfect. I hope you update this story. I'm looking forward to reading it. :3 (Comment Swap)
I already liked this story before and now that you're re-writing it I'm as excited for updates as I was back then. Can't wait to see what's new. So far I'm loving it! :)
Hi there, comment swapping it up in here :) Not gonna lie, I got really excited when I saw Jack Sparrow in the layout. I love Pirates of the Carribean, and I love when comment swap gives me new things I love :) Your story is awesome, everybody loves one of those magical walk-into-a-closet-that's-actually-a-new-world stories. Your writing is generally really good, too. This is clever and fun, which is something I've been looking for :) Awesome layout, too!
Here from Le Comment Swap. So firstly I like the title, it's interesting. I love your layout, but I'm not a fan of the writing you used, I don't mean your actual story, I mean the font. It's quite large and I found it hard to read. Other then that though, I have no complaints! Your plot is very good and I thin you're an excellent writer. Good Job!
I decided to read your story after looking at the synopsis...then got depressed when there was only one chapter....yet had a sequel lol? Then realized you re-writing it lol >_<
I am here thanks to Comment Swap. I normally would not have chosen to read this story because I legit hate The Pirates of the Caribbean movies and franchise but I have to say that you have a nice original take on this and I can see fans of POTC really liking this a lot. You do have some issues with spelling and grammar throughout the first chapter and even in the summary but you said this is in the midst of being rewritten so that is understandable. Keep up the good work!
The plot is just so amazing and unique, and I love Robin already, and her whole back story when she's sucked into COTBP.
The writing has a simple style, but is still descriptive enough that I can imagine everything in my head. You write very eloquently and I don't have to re-read any awkward sentences because everything flows so perfectly together. You're a really talented writer! I can't wait to see what happens when she meets Jack, and I'm glad you decided to re-write it otherwise I might have never found this brilliant story!
I'm also happy there's a sequel (tehee I sneaked a peak at the introduction and found out what it's about) and I just can't wait to read more! Update soon hun, this is fantastic!
YES to the sequel pretty pretty please!!!!! I'm still enraptured with this story and can never stop reading it once I've started.
Although Mibba's weirdness decided to make my subscription inactive so i missed the release of at least three chapters. Lucky I went in there to check on 'em. It keeps making random subscriptions of mine inactive so I'm definitely looking into that. >:I