what happened with this story? you updated very frequently but now three months have passsed and there's no sign of life. Writer's block? I MISS THIS STORY :( please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens to darcy!
Loved the update! :o Le gasp! She's starting to dislike school! But let's be honest here... doesn't everybody? XD Even the most perfect people? Seriously, WHO LIKES SCHOOL? Or I mean, all the time, anyway. There may be the occasional perks, but everyone gets fed up with it eventually. :P Aha, I like how Micah made her cake! That was nice of him! And it seems like her and Topher's relationship is... developing. Interesting. Great update! Can't wait for more! :D
XD I just love this story. Especially the way how she knows she needs to think 'perfect' thoughts, but she's breaking out of the perfect shell and becoming human. I love it, thanks for updating! can't wait to read more, update soon dear! <3
Loved the update! :D Aww... Topher is so adorkable. :D Aha. And hm... does Darcy's creation have something to do with what her teacher was teaching her? About the perfect race? It does make you think, and wonder. And why is it bothering her so much? So there has to be something more to it. She is supposed to be perfect... is she just the beginning, maybe? :O Maybe the scientists have more plans. Idk. But interesting update. Great job with it! Can't wait for more! :D
Wow this is great! I love the way you write, you have so much talent! I'm kind of worried about darcy though. I feel like sh won't be able to keep up with being perfect, even if she really is, because people will expect too much from her. I don't know, I usually offer critique and tell people the bad stuff about their story but with you, your story is almost like darcy - perfect. So forgive me that this comment kind of sucks. When you think about it, it's really ur fault ;). Can't wait for the next update! Keep up the good work!
haha poor Topher, his house doesn't sound too pleasing right now ^-^ Sophia -.- she's really making it awkward now. i wonder what she thinks of darcy besides unhuman hm, micah's reaction to darcy's question...>.> i wonder if he ever put any thought into her look, but i can see how blonde hair and blue eyes as the perfect classy look. i guess that was just based on modern times then :3 0.0 throwing in some history there i see XD i like how it adds and shapes with the story, good job :) Thanks for updating, i love it! can't wait to read more of this story, update soon!