September 7th, 2012 at 08:39pm
What the---?!?! WHY? Words just can't describe how disappointed I am at the fact that this has not been continued. The descriptions were just so vivid that I could just see the blood painted walls in my mind's eye. Although I did have a good idea who the 'it' was thanks to the summary, but I still wanted to know. I still wanted to find out what 'it' was and why 'it' had done what it did. I still want to I should say.The cliffhanger makes me wonder how Tony Stark/ Iron Man gets involved in all of this. Why did you have to stop?
On another note the presentation ( layout ) is absolutely gorgeous. I'm trying to understand the title and how something so beautiful can be associated with something so horrid like those deaths in the prologue. My only complaint would have to be the extremely small text. I had to read it in the default layout just to be able to read it, but that's just my bad eye sight.
Please just continue writing this! <3
The sense of urgancy within the first three paragraphs is just astounding. Is it weird to say that I was getting chills while reading the prologue? Because I did. I really like how you began the story with a handful of action and mystery. It really makes me want to read more, and brings so many questions in my head about what exactly happened and stuff.
I think my favorite part was the ending. It was just so... creepy in a way, but interesting. Like I said before, this is a fantastic story even if there is only a prologue!