Hi, I'm from the comment swap and I'm here to leave you some feedback on your story! First off, I wanted to say that I enjoy your layout and banner for being very simple. I feel as if sometimes people put more emphasis on making their story look good instead of putting good words into it. I also wanted to say that I have never read a fan fiction about The Maine, but I am looking forward to reading yours if you continue on with it. I wanted to say also that the plot is a little cliche, but it does work and is something that I know people do enjoy to read because it's one of those things that people dream of happening. I wish the prologue was a little longer and gave a little more insight into the story - it seemed a little bit more like a story summary. All in all though, I'm going to subscribe and wait for you to come off hiatus to make my full decision on this! Carry on! I'm looking forward to it! xoxo.
July 4th, 2012 at 05:37am