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  • bloomsky

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    So it’s 4 in the morning right now and I got a desperate need to read Teal after two years. I didn’t even remember Mibba or the account I had made but the story of Teal was still fresh. Thank you for this writing Teal and Winter Wakes!
    April 2nd, 2020 at 01:36am
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    So it’s 4 in the morning right now and I got a desperate need to read Teal after two years. I didn’t even remember Mibba or the account I had made but the story of Teal was still fresh. Thank you for this writing Teal and Winter Wakes!
    April 2nd, 2020 at 01:35am
  • Timeless

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    Hey there pretty lady!

    I saw you updated this, but I couldn't remember what chapter I left off on, so I started it over. I'm glad I did because looking at this story with fresh eyes reminded me of how amazing with words you are. The sense of despair you can feel from Teal gives me goosebumps. I love the layers she has, at one point she is trying to piece herself by trying to be normal but at the same time she is still so traumatized from what happened to her from "Alex"

    And the thing with the editor does seem a little unlikely though. I don't know what would make her give up information like that and not only risk giving away her author's information to the wrong person but her job as well. I haven't read too much but I look forward to the other chapters :)
    October 8th, 2017 at 06:10am
  • discoveringclouds

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    Normandy... is that you?

    Worth the wait! Finally!!! Got to see some tension and some electricity sizzling up the centre stage!!

    The mystery ... the mystery ....

    BAM! Totally deserved :P
    July 24th, 2017 at 10:11am
  • sun spirit

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    And the mystery continues to unfold! I'm so happy updates are happening again! Can't wait to see what more this has in store!
    July 24th, 2017 at 02:10am
  • RFarley1991

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    Such an amazing story! I really like your writing and can't wait for another update (on either this OR Summer Shadows)
    July 22nd, 2017 at 10:39pm
  • Sansa Stark

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    comment swap

    So, I'm assuming this is Doctor Who related? I know nothing about Doctor Who, which put me off a bit from reading it, in case there were a lot of fandom references I wouldn't understand, but I didn't feel like that at all.
    I love the start, it really grabs one's attention. The way you write is a very good mixture of pretty yet easy wording with a lovely flow.
    The layout is gorgeous but the font is too small for me, but that's really nbd :p

    Keep writing!
    August 31st, 2016 at 08:26pm
  • JasmineTheDreamer

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    Not sure why, but there's something about Claire I just don't like off the batt. Maybe it's because I know she's not the one for him? And the mystery girl is? She's bold to him in ways I bet Claire is not. He's not used to that. I bet he gets so defensive of his relationship because he knows she's right. Teal is just so sass, I love it. And by the end of the chapter - boom! I knew I didn't like Claire! She's a cheater. I'm definitely subscribing to this...I can't wait to find out what's next!
    August 21st, 2016 at 06:12am
  • sun spirit

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    Ooh, update Swoon Of course I didn't read as soon as I heard my phone go off, glanced over, and saw an e-mail stating that this was updated. That's ridiculous. And just so I don't sound as creeper-ish, I am an older reader on a new profile because I can no longer access my old one.

    Anywho, filler-ish or not, a new chapter is a new chapter. It furthers things along, just in a slower fashion. Besides, Teal's adorable and Julian's cute too because he lets her get away with so much, so just taking that into consideration, all is automatically forgiven!
    June 3rd, 2016 at 07:40am
  • discoveringclouds

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    Dear Norman,

    The King has shortened your name for number of years you haven't written any more chapters. As for the Knights, we agreed it's quite a charming new name. Also, the King is quite a humourous ruler, so you should accept the new name and read on.

    Although, with that, we envision a death for our tech devices. However, we procured sponsorship by Apple, and leave you in your natural state of tech malfunctioning, massacring delight... as demonic as that sounds.

    The reason we are here was to double check that the water was in fact turned off. Some of the Knights were practicing their underwater jousting and saw bits of cellphone drift by. So you can imagine we had to investigate.

    The King sends his regards. He thought you should be quoted on the particularly amusing passage from Chapter 8:

    “Of course he didn’t listen.” She stopped moving suddenly, forehead creasing as her mouth fell open slightly as she let out a frustrated groan. “And of course his flight lands at six thirty. My god, were you people going to give me any heads up that Satan himself was on his way to shackle me to a laptop until I pop out a new manuscript?”

    Julian let out a slight chuckle, covering his mouth as she shot him a warning glare. Her sharp tongue had certainly returned, cutting witty and amusing replies without seemingly any effort."

    His majesty always admired those who can write their characters with wit and charm. But you knew that.

    Honorably, we have been sent here today to cry (as in town crier, not actual tears) our disheartened regrets for you having a character such as Ms. Costello. One of our Knights almost puked at her first crude pokes at Julian in Chapter 9. He's fine now. As you can imagine, the Knights of Comment Swap train under the harshest literary constraints, sometimes even forced to live in alliteration for hours at a time. But we thought sharing this momentary disgust would bring you some contentment for your sickeningly sour character.

    And before we go, we would like to do a 21-Gun Salute in celebration for the natural and sweet relationship building between the two characters the readers of the story all know about. Unfortunately, the King banned 21-Gun Salutes because the Knights aim so well we had to have a 21 Quail Banquet the last 14 times... So we leave you with the honourable suggestion that you take a nap instead.

    Until next time, Norman.

    Yours Forever Truly,

    The Knights of Comment Swap
    April 26th, 2016 at 05:13am
  • discoveringclouds

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    Normandy.. I'm tempted to write you a letter. In it I would inquire regarding teal.

    Good day,

    Discovering clouds
    March 12th, 2015 at 03:20am
  • TheGreatEscape;

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    Oh my goodness. I'm in love. Your writing is absolutely fantastic! Please please please update soon, I can't wait to see where Julian and Teal's relationship goes. It's phenomenal. (:
    January 24th, 2015 at 01:42am
  • rosamarie

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    This was an amazing surprise to see! You must love me or something xD I think your the first person to have updated anything in months, as far as mibba subscriptions go for me. Plus, I just love your style of writing, so yeah... I'm super excited you updated, and you made an amazing chapter, as always. Honestly, I'm so hooked on this story it's sad. That's okay though; I can be patient.

    Can't wait to read more and hopefully eventually find out what Teal's big secret is. I mean... I guess just reading, there's enough clues to guess a little of it, maybe just the groundwork, but I know there's more to it.
    August 14th, 2014 at 01:01am
  • Pineapplez

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    Really excited to see you updated. Great as always!
    August 12th, 2014 at 05:33am
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    Really excited to see you updated. Great as always!
    August 12th, 2014 at 05:33am
  • Timeless

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    First off I was so happy to see this updated! Yay!

    I'm really curious about this actress, why does she care so much? And her acting sounds pretty amazing. What's the deal with Tate? Why the hate? So excited to find out! I loved the bit with the demon editor, it's funny how Teal's karma kicked in two fold for what she did lol.

    It was fun to read your story again <3 Keep up the good work, love

    (PS: Yay! Doctor Who will be returning soon! I'm super excited!)
    August 12th, 2014 at 04:49am
  • rosamarie

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    Okay, so I know I've commented on this before and this is so random, but I was just going through my subscriptions and looking at them and randomly came across this lmfao Just thinking back on everything I read, I remember how beautifully written this is, the unique personalities and dash of mystery you have in all of your stories. I know a lot of people don't get nearly enough comments, praise, encouragement, etc, and I love commenting on stories and letting people know when I'm really enjoying their writing so I guess that's why I dropped by to leave this ^-^ I hope the next update is sometime soon :D
    November 9th, 2013 at 06:21am
  • Iron Man.

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    This first chapter is really great! I liked how Teal didn't seem so nervous around Julian. It shows that you took the time to put a lot of thought into her personality. Most people would make a girl seem so shy and awkward around a celebrity character. I also liked the exchange between the two. I can really tell that Julian finds Teal really intriguing. :)
    October 18th, 2013 at 03:26am
  • discoveringclouds

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    Omg! I totally missed this chapter! I'm glad I talked you enough to realize it. Nice chapter... The paparazzi is do annoying. I want to know what happens next! Their conversations are so real... And so British and so directed all at once. It's really interesting.
    August 7th, 2013 at 04:32am
  • discoveringclouds

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    There goes America with that flood. Maybe Antarctica is the only safe now?

    The knights are not impressed. They've moved on to reading Disaster's Aid.

    They pretend teal isn't a colour also.

    Look what you have done.
    August 7th, 2013 at 04:12am