Love You Right - Comments

This was beautiful and I loved it-as always :)

Really really really liked this!

so cute! love me some pKane<3

jesus, that was sa-weet girl! :)
loved it!
even if I have trouble taking pattycakes serious most of the time, but this was awesomesauce!!!

He winked at me, blue eyes crinkling with his smooth smile and charm. I had to resist the urge to bite my lip as his tongue slid over his lips.
aww yeah, get in my pants puh-leez.

"Kara Kane!" My best friend, Brianna, screamed as she stumbled to me, wrapping her arms around me. The champagne bottle she held in her hand, smacked me between my shoulders. I cringed at the feeling of the damp condensation, sliding onto my skin. "Do you know that your initials are-"
lookit brianna gettin her drink on! get it gurllll. and of course, my awful KKK initials + stripper name Kara Kane

"Don't you two have the rest of your lives to make out?" Toews asked as he walked by, shaking his head at his teammate and friend.
make out, snuggle, get naked, etc.

"I could've had my pick." The captain muttered.
yeah or we could bop down to utah and get polygamist up in this wedding!

"Or maybe it makes you glow." He gave me a dreamy smile and kissed my temple before ushering me further onto the dance floor.
yep, it's my marital bliss that makes me glow, not your sperm that has now created a little sea monkey inside of me!

trying not to cringe at the gulps Patrick was taking
if my new husband actually got tanked on our wedding day i would probably strangle him.

"You're right. Why use alcohol when we can celebrate with sex." He mumbled, his breath hot against my wet skin.
okay i can be down with that...

Patrick and I could do this.
i sincerely hope so.

How could he be doing this to me when I was seven months pregnant? This was his fourth night out past two AM in a row. When was he going to understand that he was going to be a father?
i sincerely doubt that j.toews would ever do this to me... *cough* ;)

"Why would I do dishes? That's women's work." He gave me a snide grin as I whirled around at him.
yeah, i'll show him woman's work. how did i get so lucky with this booger?

"But not mama?" He inquired from me, his eyebrows wagging suggestively. I narrowed my lids at him before walking past to the living room. "What a view." I heard Patrick murmur to a naive A.J. before tickling his sides. I shook my head with a smile as I scooped up my four year old's toys, tossing them gently into the baskets along the wall.
hehe i liked this. seems very realistic. i unfortunately am hopelessly in love with that manboy.

"Buddy, I don't think hockey players suck their thumbs after they're four." Patrick winked at the little boy. A.J. looked down at his thumb and then up at the two of us.
GASP!! they don't? poor little baby boy. he just wants to suck his thumb.

To the moon and back.
:D :D :D :D <3

"Not tonight, cowboy." I reached out to him, my eyes still shut, and his hand found mine, our fingers sliding and lacing together.
are you sure? i could change my mind! :D

"I didn't even know how to love you right when we met, and now I've got a hot wife and two babies." He leaned down, pressing a firm but sweet kiss against my lips.
he for sure hit the jackpot. i guess i got a little lucky, too <3

"A little girl just like her mama." He murmured, "She'll be the only woman I love as much as you." His lips slid against mine while a perfect content, sigh escaped my body.
SWOOOOOOON <333333

love love LOVVVVVVVVED this so much!
pkane is a little wild child but he grows up eventually ;)
thank you thank you thank you!!
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