All In Your Mind - Comments

Oh my god, I love this so much already. Fawkes is great, I love him. This story really is awesome so far. I can't wait to learn more about Fawkes and the other characters. They all seem so interesting and well thought out. I can tell you've put a lot of time and thought into these characters and plot in general. I seriously am so in love with this and it has just started. I hope you update soon.

This looks really good! I really like the idea of it, how it's not just another story about a place for people with disorders, I love the supernatural part :D

The first chapter was great, really well written and I love Fawkes already. He's very life like, and I love his name :') I also love how you've included a specific dialect in there as well, it makes him seem even more real. I can't wait to read more of this, I'm subscribing! :D <3

I loved it and am defintley subscribing! The plot seems really good, and I really like your writing style.

I would enjoy reading more of this. It is a good idea, and I'm curious to see what it's going to be like. I saw that you watched Trick 'R' Treat in your journal and it kind of reminds me of those kids form the bus. But, I think your story is different from that.

Tell me when the first chapter is up. (:

I love the banner but the background doesn't fit it as well as it could for me but that's just my opinion.

But over fifty years ago, it wasn't.
That line bugs me, it may just be me but I feel like it could flow better but I'm not sure how exactly :/

I love the plot, it seems like you're going to go the ghost route which I rarely see. Also I love how you make it seem as if it's very possible it's all in their head, I feel that way I can decide.

I liked where you put mistakes in the hospitals passed, my grandpa was in a mental hospital because he was an alcoholic and they didn't how to deal with it, not important but that part reminded me of it.

Good luck on this, you have a good idea :)

Whoa, these seems totally freaking sweet! I would most definitely read this and comment on every chapter of it. (;D ;D ;D ;D) It's really interesting and while I was reading the summary, I could just hear these lost souls. I've been in a mental ward (just visiting, haha) and it was so scary and it was normal seeming. I can only imagine how weird and crazy this place would be. And let's face it, anything with "Sunny" in its name is usually not sunny.

The layout is totally creepy and has this vintage feel to it, like you're going back in time. Perfect touch.

This looks incredibly good so far! I really hope you start this soon. For now I shall subscribe and wait in anticipation. :')

I love the banner. Absolutely love it. It's very dark and yet it feels brutal, too. Because it's not edited to death, you know.
The background is perfect by the way, because it's sort of confusing me, and it feels like it fits.

The actual summary is straight to the point, but it doesn't give away too much. I like how it was one of those 'institutes' back in the day where people were genuinely just dumped because their families couldn't or didn't want to deal with them. That information alone sets for a very intruiging premise. The hint at something supernatural is brilliant, because it's not flat out GHOSTS WILL BE HERE but yet it makes you wonder "hmmm, what is going onnn?"

I love it. :D

This sounds so creepy and good! I don't think I've ever heard of a plot like this before and your summery is really very intriguing! I think that this will be a great story, and I really like how much your picture seems to fit the story so well! I cant wait to see where this goes next :)

Seems like something I'll really enjoy reading! The background goes well with the banner, which is the perfect picture to use in this case. Even if you didn't have much of a summary, the picture still tells a lot about what the story contains, which is wonderful.

Welcome to Sunnyroad Insane Institute, a low security asylum for young adults to have full time care and recover from any kind of disorder.

I would tweak this a little so it said, "a low security asylum where young adults receive full-time care so that they may reach a full recovery."

Other than that, great job!