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  • pawnsinplay

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    Not gonna lie, Ashley was kind of annoying the crap out of me in this chapter. Sandi's just trying to help her, especially with those guys, and Ashley was acting like a child throwing a tantrum in front of her mom haha. I love Sandi though, she's easily my favorite character in this story. Loved this chapter!
    June 26th, 2014 at 02:41am
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    I get that Matt is running a business, he's trying to make some money and Ashley losing Brian's payment, yeah, I can understand how that would be bad for Matt. But, really? The guy raped her. Brian needs to be told that that kind of behaviour is not okay.

    And I can kind of understand his idea of punishment, too. I mean, were he to force her to do the household chores or something, it wouldn't really deter her from doing it again. This kind of punishment, sucks. But I can see his reasoning for it.

    I can't say I'm all that surprised to learn about Sandi and Matt, either. The way she spoke to him, and just the way she acted around him - like she didn't give a shit - led me to believe that maybe something happened between them. But there it is again, that "weird" relationship. I can't wait to find out what "weird" actually means! XD

    Sandi is right, too, Ash needs to talk to someone about what happened to her. If she bottles it all up, she'll explode, and it won't be pretty. Her breakdown outside the cafe only proves that. I hope Ash will be okay and Matt doesn't find out that Sandi gave her the money!

    Awesome chapter, can't wait for more! :D
    June 23rd, 2014 at 05:01pm
  • shortygirl

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    Loved the update
    June 19th, 2014 at 03:28am
  • requiem.

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    Thank God for for Sandi!
    June 19th, 2014 at 01:23am
  • Greenwolf7

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    Love this story so much and can't wait for more and wow Matt was a little harsh but that's his way of punishing and ash needs to know that and she was quite mean to Jen, In the next chapter I would like to see some Brian and Jen please xxx
    June 18th, 2014 at 11:33pm
  • heretic.

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    Fucking hell, Matt! I know these girls are hookers but, Jesus Christ! They work for you, which means you should be taking care of them, not berating them when they don't get the money after being raped! And then he tried to do exactly the same thing that Brian did!

    I want to jump into your story and kick them both in the nuts! Brian - I kind of expect that kind of behaviour from him, he's a cocky little bastard. But not Matt. *shakes head* I only hope he doesn't go too hard on her!

    And she's right about Jen, too. I know that Brian treats her poorly, but she does need to grow a set and stick up for herself. Maybe then Brian wouldn't treat her so bad.

    Awesome chapter, I'm so looking forward to seeing what happens next! Crazy
    June 14th, 2014 at 06:58am
  • pawnsinplay

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    W. T. F. I don't know who I'm more pissed at, Brian or Matt. Obviously Brian but good God. I need to know what happens next!
    June 12th, 2014 at 06:05am
  • shortygirl

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    What the hell Matt! That was fucked up. I shouldn't be surprised that Matt cared more about the money.
    June 10th, 2014 at 03:45am
  • Greenwolf7

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    OMG wonder what's going to happen please update as soon as you can and I like the relationship between Brian and Jen, it's like he's her master time person, please keep that going xxx
    June 9th, 2014 at 05:48pm
  • requiem.

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    I hope Matt apologizes!! Update soon.
    June 9th, 2014 at 03:00pm
  • heretic.

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    I like that Sandi is so up front about her past, and it's actually refreshing to know that there wasn't anything bad that happened to her, which made her get into the business. Normally, girls are abused or forced into prostitution. I don't know, I guess I like how normal Sandi seems.

    Matt's character just gets more and more intriguing each chapter I read. I wonder why he likes to be left alone, afterwards. Is he like that with everyone? Or just Amber. Hmm. It may be innocent, but my spidey senses are tingling! Haha.

    I'm taking it that Ashley doesn't agree with the "girls like us" theory, I'm thinking she's going to be a bit of a hot head in the coming chapters, and I can almost smell a confrontation with Matt. Should be interesting!

    Loved it, can't wait for the next one! :D
    June 3rd, 2014 at 07:25pm
  • shortygirl

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    Loved the update.
    May 31st, 2014 at 01:55am
  • Greenwolf7

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    Love this please update soon xxx
    May 30th, 2014 at 03:35pm
  • pawnsinplay

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    I loved the one on one time with Ash and Sandi. It was interesting to read Sandi's background, to learn that she was never abused or misused and is in this just because she enjoys sex. That surprised me actually. I think most people believe that girls end up in this line of work because they've been abandoned or abused at some point in their life. I'm really looking forward to seeing how Ashley handles the "girls like us" theory that both Sandi and Amber gave her. Loved this!
    May 30th, 2014 at 02:26am
  • Saying-I'm-So-Sorry

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    This story is really intriguing, keeps me wanting more. That last chapter was really intense, I was so scared for Ashley and Amber. It's a good thing Matt got there in time. Matt and Amber are also interesting. They seem kind of sweet? But the dynamic of their relationship is weird. I can't wait to read more of this story.
    May 19th, 2014 at 04:58pm
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    So the relationship between Matt and Amber...completely messed up. Like completely. I want to say it's still cute, in a way, but I don't even know if I can lol it's just...okay, moving on!

    I was literally holding my breath through the entire scene where Amber and Ashley were attacked. That was so tense and scary, I thought for sure it was going to get worse. Thank baby Jesus that Matt showed up in time and saved them! I don't think I want to know what he did to that creep, but I'm sure we'll find out in the next chapter...or will we? Unsure And the way Amber was talking about those leeches...holy shit, I really hope none of the girls encounter them ever again. Like ever. I just wanted to scream at the screen, RUN ASHLEY AND AMBER, RUN FOR YOUR LIIIIIVES!

    Anyhoo. Love this!
    May 14th, 2014 at 10:42pm
  • shortygirl

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    Seems like there are two different sides to Matt. I want to see the nicer side. Good thing he got there on time.
    May 14th, 2014 at 03:08am
  • heretic.

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    Eeeeep, that was some scary stuff! Lucky that Matt got to them so quickly otherwise it might have been a very different ending for them!

    I'm looking forward to seeing more of Matt and Amber's relationship, it seems he has two different sides to him.
    May 13th, 2014 at 11:44am
  • Greenwolf7

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    Love this and poor amber and Ashley it was good shadows came and poor Jen, but I like it with jen updated soon xxxx
    May 13th, 2014 at 05:49am
  • OctoberA7X

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    Shit that was scary! Pardon my French but I was terrified this whole chapter. Poor Jen! I actually think Ashley will be the one to put her foot in Brian's ass
    May 12th, 2014 at 11:09pm