Thanatophobia - Comments

I was so happy when I saw this was updated! And it didn't suck, you silly billy :P I was actually really surprised at how long it was and it was nice to see some development of Lauren but I think the nightmare was the best bit :)

So I got round to reading this again after getting a notification, what yesterday or something? And find that not only is there one new chapter, but THREE. Seriously, THREE since last read this. You're on a roll girlie. I must say though, my favourite bit was where she started freaking out about her scars. I can most definitely relate and her anxiety was described perfectly :) Great job.

Gah Moonlight Sonata xD My favorite Beethoven song ever! Such an eerie chapter with the attic and piano. But it was perfect. Can't wait for the next update!

Really great. Seriously. One teensy grammar thing, there's one paragraph where you might wanna put a speech mark in at the start. Continued speech but different paragraphs, don't end the first paragraph with speech marks, but start the next with them.
But yes. You can sort of tell you got inspired or whatever. It's like an effortless stream of writing etc etc :)

Love the story. Read the whole thing in one sitting 'cause I just wanna know what happens next!

Woot! Even if I read this before you even posted it, I figured I should still comment. :)

I love the pace of this story, very natural and all flowy and stuff. Yeah, I could gush on for a few hours about how much I love your characters but I won't because I have an assignment to do but hopefully you get the picture: they're GREAT. Anyway, I hope this week goes better for you, love.

Much better than before :) Just one little thing. About half way through, "I doubted they were doubting", might wanna check that ;) Anyway, pretty good but definitely more interested to see where this whole situation with Millie/Lauren/Nick goes. Looking forward to more.

So I figured I should be nice and make up for not commenting before and comment twice. It's just a thing. I have a Q about sam to ask you after school today broscone, so you should tot's find me at muh humble locker abode. Yeah I love the thing about the pond. 'Tis very ironic. :))))) That is a lot of mouths... Yup, so update soon!

Two in one week indeed :) So I loved the whole car thing where she thought she was, like, dying. Enjoyed! So much! Yeehaw!

So much loooove for this story. The feel of it is just so perfect. Sucks you in.
Anyway. Nice update.

I'm such an idiot, I wondered why I hadn't gotten any notifications about updates and I wasn't even subscribed...oh my god. Anyway, I read it all and it's actually, well, fabulous. I actually really love Shelby's character, there's something very vulnerable about her and there's no false tough girl attitude that so often sets up a Mary-Sue. I like how she analyses people, not Sherlock Holmes but not a Bella Swan either. I love Lauren already. She seems adorable. The pacing is also pretty spot on. Great, great work :) Keep it up.

Awesome chappy bud! Excitement = officially building.

So, I love a good mysterious guy, and that's why I adore Cameron. He reminds me of a guy I used to date and I really like the descriptions at the beginning. It's really well written and I adore how you tied in the title, thanataphobia, back into the story. Well done.

I also love Lauren because she's got an air of rebel about her. The hit about dumbasses is really great :) she reminds me of me and I think I'd get a long better with Lauren rather than Lucy. She seems like she'd be kind of fake or disloyal, you know? Maybe just first impressions.

Me no espeaky espanole.... hahaha I loved it. Dude! Did she kill her bff?!

I'm not good with Spanish, but I do love this story :)

Haha I life Cameron!!!! He's such an asshole!! And I write based off my life all the time. It's so I souring and easy to vent through. I feel you.

i really like this so far :D update soon please :)

Yeah, what a jerk!

Happy Valentines Day. *gives hearts and chocolates* <3