I like your new character, even though he's kinda strange . . . is he the type that just hangs out with the bullies but secretly has passion? In any case . . . brilliant, as usual. I love Andedria's hair. (Is that how you spell it?)
I like your newest alter-ego one. I also have another story that when I get inspired I will post- its like Tidbits, short stories I write down in moments of inspiration. I totally have to do an alter ego one. Nice job :D
Nice, Watermelon. Using nicknames instead of our real names. That's the first step to Internet privacy! :D otherwise . . . adorable, even though you keep stealing Lemonrind's story.
About your comment.....I know exactly who you are, and I'm proud of you. At least there's some passion left in the world. Oh, and, here's another posted comment to boast about.
the first chapter left me thinking like FantasyHeart said, makes me wonder who they were and what was happening to her and the second one I found really sweet :)
Okay slightly more heart-felt, that was really cool! What was happening to the lady? Why did she gurgle blood? Who was she? Who was he? You leave us with so many questions. Keep going with whatever you have planned next.