Two people subscribed to a one-shot and didn't bother to leave a comment? I don't get it; it's not like they can be waiting for an update in order to comment. More importantly, though, how did this little story of yours get so little recognition? I'm pretty much flabbergasted over here. And I'm also proud that I managed to use that word in an actual sentence. :D
Anyways, I don't usually comment on layouts, but I did want to just let you know that it can be a little difficult to read this with the way that the banner ends up behind the text and all when you're scrolling. I'm not sure if it was always like that or if it changed when Mibba "updated" the layout maker, but I just thought you should be warned. Otherwise, though, I do everything's great. That's got to be one of my favorite Zacky-poses, by the way.
I really liked this one-shot, love! I think Cassie's got some serious balls, and she seems very real and down to earth. When she was first all "but, whatever, he's famous!" I was admittedly a little worried at what the heck kind of a person she was, but then it all made sense and I could breath easier. xD I really did like that she was proud of herself and her work, and that she was willing to take the risk of that little deal she made with Zacky. I also really enjoyed your little touches of details like how she would bring her drink with her and not leave it behind -- it showed the intelligent, careful side of her tough exterior, and it was just a nice touch all around. It made everything seem more real. As did the little story about her most embarrassing moment -- I honestly laughed out loud at that. How hilarious and awkward! And then Zacky not letting her live it down. xD Adorable!
And I obviously thought the ending was very sweet. (: I really liked that you were able to make this one-shot progress without having to add in unnecessary drama over every little thing. For instance, the fact that he thought she was dating Dave, but he still had a very natural, respectable reaction to it, and it really didn't turn into a shit fest like it would have in most other stories. You really kept it real, and that made this story so much easier to connect with.
Which is also why I completely do not understand how I am the only comment on this. This was a damn good one-shot! :3
July 2nd, 2013 at 06:27pm
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Anyways, I don't usually comment on layouts, but I did want to just let you know that it can be a little difficult to read this with the way that the banner ends up behind the text and all when you're scrolling. I'm not sure if it was always like that or if it changed when Mibba "updated" the layout maker, but I just thought you should be warned. Otherwise, though, I do everything's great. That's got to be one of my favorite Zacky-poses, by the way.
I really liked this one-shot, love! I think Cassie's got some serious balls, and she seems very real and down to earth. When she was first all "but, whatever, he's famous!" I was admittedly a little worried at what the heck kind of a person she was, but then it all made sense and I could breath easier. xD I really did like that she was proud of herself and her work, and that she was willing to take the risk of that little deal she made with Zacky. I also really enjoyed your little touches of details like how she would bring her drink with her and not leave it behind -- it showed the intelligent, careful side of her tough exterior, and it was just a nice touch all around. It made everything seem more real. As did the little story about her most embarrassing moment -- I honestly laughed out loud at that. How hilarious and awkward! And then Zacky not letting her live it down. xD Adorable!
And I obviously thought the ending was very sweet. (: I really liked that you were able to make this one-shot progress without having to add in unnecessary drama over every little thing. For instance, the fact that he thought she was dating Dave, but he still had a very natural, respectable reaction to it, and it really didn't turn into a shit fest like it would have in most other stories. You really kept it real, and that made this story so much easier to connect with.
Which is also why I completely do not understand how I am the only comment on this. This was a damn good one-shot! :3